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Old 13th August 2008, 11:42 PM   #56 (permalink)
Harlekin
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Harlekin Goblin Sharpshooter (Lvl 2)
Some Errors and Suggestions

Hi Matthias,

This is great work. Here are a few minor issues that you may want to fix:
-Orb Mastery cannot be chosen as an Wizard's Implement.
-On CharsheetI Character Name is misspelled with a k.
-Eldarin is missing his racial Bonus to Dex

Moreover, I would redisign the character sheets somewhat to make it look less cluttered:
-4ed has no magic items that increase attributes, so having an item bonus box for attributes is unnecessary.
-Can the critical damage box be shrunk to allow for more space in the effect box?
-I'm not sure the 2 Base attack Bonus Boxes need to be on the sheet, as all those calculations should have been done elsewhere. This room could be used to put one more Favorite power on.
-Maybe we can also rethink putting the powers as the last thing on the sheet. After all, nothing defines a PC like his powers.

Anyway, hope some of this helps. Thanks.

Last edited by Harlekin; 14th August 2008 at 12:32 AM.. Reason: found more
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