4th June 2009, 03:11 AM
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#191 (permalink)
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Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Staten Island
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1. I calculate that you've spent 22 points building Elyra. Everyone was allowed 15 points to spend on ability scores. Let me know what I might be missing here. Many of my comments are predicated on the scores reflected on your current character sheet, which may in turn render a lot of other errors in other departments depending upon whether you've overspent. In the ability score area, you also currently have a 14 Wisdom set to a +0 modifier when it should be +2 (but later in the sheet you've correctly used a +2 mod for Wis, so I'm guessing this is simple oversight not an actual error).
| I think you may be overlooking the +2 human bonus on Dex, so the 16 there actually costs 5. That leaves:
13 3
16 5 (5 for 14, +2 human bonus)
12 2
12 2
14 5
8 -2
Total:17-2=15
I fixed the error next to Wis. Quote: |
2. A throwing axe should have a critical multiplier of x2, not x3. Again, let me know if you feel I've got this incorrect (with specific page number reference, if need be).
| Sorry, my mistake. Fixed. Quote: |
3. You may need to adjust your attack and damage area to make the +1 to atk/dmg from Point Blank Shot more visible. Either that, or just be sure to remind me that you have PBS during combat so that I don't miss giving you the benefit of having the feat.
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4. Let me know what sourcebook the Reactionary trait is from.
| It's from the "Pathfinder Character Traits Web Enhancement." As I write this, I realize I should have asked if that were fair game. Sorry about that. Here is the link: http://files.meetup.com/1101323/Path...its%20BETA.pdf Quote: |
5. You correctly, I think, spent 9 skill points on Elyra. Might want (as you've already observed in another post of yours) to adjust the skill header so that it reads 9, instead of 8.
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6. Let me know why Perception is using a miscellaneous modifier of +5. I'm seeing the +2 to Perception from the Alertness feat but am not sure where the other +3 is coming from.
| +3 for class skill, +2 for Alertness feat Quote: |
7. I saw you might have been working out some ties with other character/s. Let me know what you've officially worked out (and then please include it in the background posted in the character repository for Elyra).
| OK, I'll finalize it and post the change.
Thanks,
Mark |
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