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Sounds fun, thats a lot of detail to remember though. Ive got some others q'd at the moment. First up...a sexy amazon. We'll see if I can do that. I don't like to spend too much time on my pieces (under 45 min if I can) because I've got a lot of other projects going on. But it's good practice and a fun distraction. Thanks for the kudo's ladies and gentlemen. This is fun.
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Originally Posted by Kai Lord
Cool work greatseamonster!
Feel free to take a crack at my guy:
Elijayess Moonshadow is a rugged wild elf, though not as feral looking as some members of his race, due to years away from the harsh forests of his homeland. The strongest elf who ever lived, Elijayess is still lean and lithe. His rock-hard muscles look carved out of stone, but his elven heritage prevents him from being overly bulky. His nearly waist length black hair is fine and straight like that of a Native American, but he keeps it pulled back in a thick single braid. His long bangs would cover his eyes if he didn’t keep them swept to one side. His skin is dark.
His signature weapon is his mighty longbow. At first glance it appears crude for an elven weapon, not delicate and artistic but massive in its destructive capabilities. Few men alive possess the strength to draw the string to their ear, fewer still can string it. Countless men and beasts have been felled by the deadly bow of Elijayess.
His other weapons include an enchanted bastard sword inlaid with a slim mural of reptilian beasts along the middle of the blade (the sword possesses special enchantments against reptilian foes), and a dagger is sheathed on the outside of each of his shins, their handles protruding from his leather boots.
He wears form fitting buckskin pants and sleeveless leather armor on his torso, accentuating his muscular bare arms. A blood-red hooded cloak adorns his shoulders, and a quiver full of black feathered arrows is strapped across his back, over the cloak. His bastard sword hangs in a scabbard at his side and he wears a gold amulet around his neck.
I wasnt sure what kind of weapon she would have. I assumed at somepoint she would have weilded a glaive or guisarme. I wanted to give her a look of nobility. I can imagine her in different moods, even though she's obviously just taken someone out, I think I can see her in a different light as nurturing when she dosnt have to kick ass. My own little story in doing this pic was imagining that she had just taken down an assasin that had crawled through a palace window. I didnt include the dismembered assasin.
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Originally Posted by Arafang
Name: Callisarieos
Race: Amazon
Eyes: Green
Skin: Pale
Hair: Red, goes about six inches below shoulders
Height: 5'9
Callisarieos was born in Sparta Greece. She was very beautiful and was very popular among the men. she had an older brother, and her mother pretty much blamed her for everything bad that happened to the family. Even when Callisarieos's father was killed in battle. She was considered a "danger" to Sparta, even though no one's ever figured out why. When the King of Sparta went to Ares' temple to seek council, the god appeared to him in a dream "Take the girl away from Sparta, leave her somewhere far off where no one will ever find her. If she steps one foot on Spartan soil, she will be dead within the day." The next night the king sent out his guards to kidnap Callisarieos. They killed her family and knocked her unconscious so she wouldn't be screaming and fighting them. They left her in Asia Minor with a scar down her right shoulder. The Amazons found her and took her in and healed her, and so on and so on. Callisarieos was a born warrior, so this was no difficult task to be an Amazon. She became the Commanding Officer, Story Writer, Song Writer, Carer of the Children, and the High Priestess of Ares much to the queens dismay as she pointed out that Callis was only human and could do only so much. But Callis stuck in there.
She usually wears a black leather ankle length skirt that has slits up to her hips on both sides, she wheres a belly shirt that reveals mainly all of her stomach and is strapless. She goes barefoot and wears a black cape with a red interior. Callis also wears a gold snake armbracelet on her right arm, and a silver on her left.
Here ya go. Its another "Marvel" Inspired piece. I wanted to do something with a lot of action. Black n White, Quick sketch....I should be doing drawings for my party...what am I doing???
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Originally Posted by Kai Lord
Feel free to take a crack at my guy:
Elijayess Moonshadow is a rugged wild elf, though not as feral looking as some members of his race, due to years away from the harsh forests of his homeland. The strongest elf who ever lived, Elijayess is still lean and lithe. His rock-hard muscles look carved out of stone, but his elven heritage prevents him from being overly bulky. His nearly waist length black hair is fine and straight like that of a Native American, but he keeps it pulled back in a thick single braid. His long bangs would cover his eyes if he didn’t keep them swept to one side. His skin is dark.
His signature weapon is his mighty longbow. At first glance it appears crude for an elven weapon, not delicate and artistic but massive in its destructive capabilities. Few men alive possess the strength to draw the string to their ear, fewer still can string it. Countless men and beasts have been felled by the deadly bow of Elijayess.
His other weapons include an enchanted bastard sword inlaid with a slim mural of reptilian beasts along the middle of the blade (the sword possesses special enchantments against reptilian foes), and a dagger is sheathed on the outside of each of his shins, their handles protruding from his leather boots.
He wears form fitting buckskin pants and sleeveless leather armor on his torso, accentuating his muscular bare arms. A blood-red hooded cloak adorns his shoulders, and a quiver full of black feathered arrows is strapped across his back, over the cloak. His bastard sword hangs in a scabbard at his side and he wears a gold amulet around his neck.
Here ya go. Its another "Marvel" Inspired piece. I wanted to do something with a lot of action. Black n White, Quick sketch....I should be doing drawings for my party...what am I doing???
Bad. Ass. Thanks man, you rock!
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I was wondering if I could get a colorful represantion of Traxus. Here are his Stats:
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Traxus: Half-Red Dragon Tyrannosaurus Fighter 5
Huge Dragon
Hit Dice: 18d10+ 144 + 5d10 + 40 (313 hp)
Initiative: +3
Speed: 40 ft. (8 squares), Fly 40 ft. (Average)
Armor Class: 20 (–2 size, +3 Dex, +9 natural) touch 11, flat-footed 17
Base Attack/Grapple: +18/+35
Attack: Bite + 32 melee (3d6+21)
Full Attack: Bite +32 melee (3d6+15) and 2 Claws +31 (2d8 + 7)
Space/Reach: 15 ft./10 ft.
Special Attacks: Improved grab, swallow whole, Snatch, Rend, Clinging Breath Weapon, Dire Charge, Improved Trip
Special Qualities: Low-light vision, Darkvision 60ft, Scent, Immune to Fire, Frightful Presence, SR 18
Saves: Fort +16, Ref +12, Will +8
Abilities: Str 41, Dex 17, Con 26, Int 17, Wis 19, Cha 14
Skills: 6 skill points per level, Max ranks = 21, Class skills = hide, listen, spot.
Feats: Multiattack, Improved Multiattack, Awaken Frightful Presence, Awaken Spell resistance, Clinging Breath, Dire Charge, Snatch, Rend, Improved Snatch, Improved Trip, Power Attack, Cleave, Weapon Focus: Bite.
Environment: Warm plains
Organization: Solitary or pair
Challenge Rating: 15
Treasure: None
Alignment: Always neutral
Advancement: 19–36 HD (Huge); 37–54 HD (Gargantuan)
Level Adjustment: —
NOTE: Physical stat roles: 15, 14, 13. Intelligence Roll (as awakening spell says to): 17. Charisma bonus from awakening spell: +1. Bite is a Primary Attack. Claws are Secondary. As an NPC Monster, he gets 4 stat boosts (one every four hit dice), all of which go into wisdom.
Snatch (Ex): Traxus can choose to start a grapple when he hits with a claw or bite attack. With his bite he can do this to any creature of Large or smaller. With his claws he can snatch anything of medium size of smaller. He can then attempt to start a grapple as a free action without provoking an attack of opportunity. If he wins the grapple check, he establishes a hold.
These are Traxus options for what to do the subsequent rounds, by the creature’s size
Large
• Traxus can only snatch large creatures with his bite attack. If he does so, the creature is not allowed a Reflex save against Traxus’ breath weapon.
• Every round, Traxus automatically does bite damage to the creature, and can still make claw attacks against it.
• If held in the bite attack, the creature is not allowed a Reflex save against Traxus’ breath weapon.
• If held in the bite attack, Traxus can drop a creature as a free action, or fling it aside as a standard action. A flung creature travels 1d6 x 10 feet, and takes 1d6 points of damage per 10 feet traveled. If Traxus flings a snatched opponent while flying, the opponent takes this amount or falling damage, whichever is greater.
Medium or smaller
• Traxus can snatch medium creatures with either his bite or his claw attacks.
• Every round, Traxus automatically deals bite damage to the creature if it I in his mouth, and can still use his claw attacks against it.
• Conversely, if he has it held in his claws, he automatically does claw damage to it, and can still use his bite attack against it.
• If held in the bite attack, the creature is not allowed a Reflex save against Traxus’ breath weapon.
• If held in the bite attack, Traxus can drop a creature as a free action, or fling it aside as a standard action. A flung creature travels 1d6 x 10 feet, and takes 1d6 points of damage per 10 feet traveled. If Traxus flings a snatched opponent while flying, the opponent takes this amount or falling damage, whichever is greater.
• Whether his bite or his claws hold them, Traxus can attempt to swallow whole a creature of medium size or smaller by making a successful grapple check. The swallowed creature takes 2d8+8 points of bludgeoning damage and 8 points of acid damage per round from the tyrannosaurus’s gizzard. A swallowed creature can cut its way out by using a light slashing or piercing weapon to deal 25 points of damage to the gizzard (AC 12). Once the creature exits, muscular action closes the hole, another swallowed opponent must cut its own way out. Traxus’ gizzard can hold 2 Medium, 8 Small, 32 Tiny, or 128 Diminutive or smaller opponents.
Rend (Ex): If Traxus hits with both of his claw attacks, he automatically does 8d8 + 34 damage. He cannot attempt to snatch or grapple while doing so.
Clinging Breath Weapon (Ex): Cone of Fire, 30 ft. long, 30 ft. wide, 30 ft. high. 6d10 fire damage to any in area. Reflex save DC 19 halves. Unless the creature has evasion or some such, the next round they take an additional half of the damage they took the first round. Trexus can use this ability once every 1d4+1 rounds.
Frightful Presence (Su): Any creatures within 45 ft. of Traxus must make a Will save DC 21. On a failure, creatures with 4HD or less are panicked for 4d6 rounds. Creatures of 5HD or more are merely shaken for 4d6 rounds.
Improved Trip (Ex): Traxus can trip opponents with his claw attacks. He does not provoke an attack of opertunity, and gains an additional +12 to his strength check (for size and feats). In addition, he can immediately make a melee attack as if he had not used that attack for the trip attempt. This means that yes, he can trip and then snatch. If his trip attempt is successful, the opponent has a –4 AC penalty for being prone.
Dire Charge (Ex): Traxus can make a full attack action after charging an opponent, as opposed to only a standard attack.
Immunities (Ex): Immune to all fire damage.
Skills: A tyrannosaurus has a +2 racial bonus on Listen and Spot checks.
COMBAT:
(Against Medium Opponents)
Traxus enters combat with a flying charge. He can move up to eighty feet, and can land 5 feet away and still attack. Note that he gets a +2 attack bonus to all his attacks and a –2 AC penalty. When he does land, he can take a full attack action against the creature. His favorite move at this point is to try to trip the opponent with his claw attacks.
If he succeeds with the first trip attempt, he attacks with both claws, attempting to rend. He bites as well, after the rend.
If he fails the first trip attack but succeeds at the second, he cannot rend and instead uses his free claw attack to snatch the opponent (with the opponent at a disadvantage in strength being prone). After snatching he bites the opponent, transferring the opponent to his mouth. If neither trip attack succeeds, Traxus tries to snatch the opponent with his bite attack.
Finally, Trexus uses his breath weapon as free action, regardless of where his opponent is.
If the opponent ends the round in his mouth, on his next turn Traxus will try to swallow it whole, or throw it aside if he is feeling belligerent.
If it ends the round being rended, Traxus will spend the next round trying to snatch it into his mouth.
If his opponents somehow manage to avoid all his attacks, he spends the next round trying to rend them.
Being an intelligent being, Traxus will attempt to take out the spell casters first, followed by the fighters, and then whoever’s left.
NOTE: Traxus has Cleave. But it can only be used against opponents within 5 ft. (IE: tank fighters). Traxus also has power attack. He probably maxes it out, taking 5 off his attack mod and adding 5 to damage.
I wasnt sure what kind of weapon she would have. I assumed at somepoint she would have weilded a glaive or guisarme. I wanted to give her a look of nobility. I can imagine her in different moods, even though she's obviously just taken someone out, I think I can see her in a different light as nurturing when she dosnt have to kick ass. My own little story in doing this pic was imagining that she had just taken down an assasin that had crawled through a palace window. I didnt include the dismembered assasin.
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Hmm, I was kind of hoping for a larger pic and a bit less cartoonish. Maybe, if you redo it, you can use a jungle background and show Traxus from a side view with his head turned to right (so as to face the viewers of the pic). Maybe he could be breathing flame towards the ground so as to get a good look at his face. It would look really neat if his wings were completely spread out. I hope this doesn't sound like too much. Though I would be entirely grateful and be willing to make a donation to your cause if you did do it as per my request. Hows $20 or $30 sound.
Me and a bunch of ENWorlders are making a cooperative dungeon (Let's make a dungeon).
The main antagonist will be a Marilith demon. I would really like it if someone could create an illustration of her (she's called Blasphemy). If it could be a color pic with background (it will also be the cover of the adventure's PDF), so much the better.
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