Heinrich (Scott DeWar)
What are all the asterisks for in the skill section? They don't seem to be 'human bonus' like listed.
Finances and Equipment are difficult to decipher. Not all of your gear is listed in the equipment section; you need to fix that. Having expended scrolls still listed in the equipment section could be confusing; the Equipment section is for the gear you currently own. I think it best to have a section under Finances where you list monies expended for such things. I put a couple of your purchased and used scrolls there so you can see what I mean. The total value of your gear + expenditures is off from your treasures earned + beginning wealth; under by roughly 500 gold. I very well could have missed something having to flip back and forth between the three sections you have stuff listed in, though. Consolidate that info in the Finances & Equipment sections and I'll take another look.
NOT YET APPROVED
Ok, gotten most of Heinrich's gear figured out. He's still down by a bit but I don't think it's too large of an amount.
Heinrich (Scott DeWar) APPROVED for level 3.
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Ariel Esimae & Megan Fairchild are still waiting on level 3 approvals. Walking Dad's Guardian (Stefano Rodriges) is in that same boat as well, but he is still tagged as approved, but no judge signed off on level 3 yet.
Also in my game that I DM, Garnet and Ausk are still pending approval as well.
Add Borric Hawkins to the list of pending.
All in all 12 approvals (level-ups and new characters) waiting. And those are just the ones that have the Awaiting Approval category. I'll try to get to some more this afternoon.
And Sylvain will be joining the list by the end of the day. I don't envy you any right now.
I looked. There is only one that I could even help you with as a non-Judge. You guys are really hurting with only only four of you doing the approvals. And looking at your in game activity, you are all pretty busy right now.
I'll be able to get to some this weekend - I'll be "bach'in" it as the wife and daughter are going to visit her parents for the weekend, so I should have some time on my hands.
Ariel Esimae (perrinmiller)
Without an updated Adventure Log I can't really make an accurate check of her gear value totals. It's close but I'm guessing there are treasure awards or expenditures from Expansion that you haven't listed. I'll give my tentative APPROVED since everything else checks out but she'll need to have the gear checked either once the Adventure Log is updated or at the end of Expansion.
Check the first post of Expansion, it has all the money awarded thus far from encounters, and there hasn't been any actual equipment yet, as the story hasn't really fit to give specific items out.
For my first act as a judge (woo hoo), I have reviewed Elenka and Drev.
A) Drev's to hit is +7. (4 str + 2 bab + 1 weapon focus)
B) The first line of the skills section needs to be updated to show two levels.
C) I added an XP link for the particular post for the current adventure because it is not the first or last page of the thread.
Everything else looks fine. I checked the adventures, and they gave you all gold, which added up, so I hereby APPROVE Elenka for second level.
Reviewing Boric: (since PM cannot do it himself)
A) In the level up skills, you had the ending total as 17(new) which was a copy/paste leftover. It ends at 23(new). Corrected.
B) Your AC and flat footed AC were low by one. The pieces were correct, but the totals were low. Corrected, and specified as a Deflection bonus for the ring.
C) Your carried weight totals 177.5, and you had 176.5. Corrected.
D) The gold spent on items looks to be 55 gp over what you have earned. It is a little hard to determine when scrolling between the inventory and rewards sections, so I cannot be sure. If some original equipment pieces were sold off but not registered, that would make up the difference.
Maybe marking the far right of the inventory listing what pieces were taken as loot would make it easier on auditors.
Therefore, Boric is APPROVED for level four.
Originally Posted by Satin Knights
I have reviewed Elenka and Drev.
Corrected the issues you pointed out. Thanks!
Thanks guys. Ariel has not taken any treasure from Expansion yet, so that is not on her sheet IIRC.
Borric's equipment and money? I will have to go over that with a fine tooth comb at some point since I have made so many changes in between approvals over the months of his existence I am not sure. It might just be calculator operator error.
I APPROVED both Garnet and Ausk this morning.
On Garnet, I changed the ACP to -5 total. MWK Plate is -5 and the MWK light shield is 0. But then Fighter gets to reduce the ACP for platemail by another 1. So it should be -4? If that's correct, her sheet will need to be fixed again.
For Megan. I cleaned up BAB's and fixed some Attack bonuses that were missed in leveling up. I removed a lot of "0"s too just to clean it up.
I changed the MWK Dogslicer's Attack bonus to "MWK" instead of magic.
Her HP's have been wrong since day 1. Rogue has d8 HD. So new total is 29.
I APPROVE Megan's level up to 3
I APPROVED the Guardian (Stefano Rodriges) for level 3. I only changed his Skill Points in the level up section. His totals above were correct.
I reviewed Kalinn. I took out some zeros among the damage dice to make it easier to read.
Intimidate was correct at +7, but was missing 2 ranks spent. I fixed it so the total Skill Point spent is now 15.
I APPROVED Kalinn for level 3
I APPROVED Sylvain Marana for both levels 3 & 4. I fixed the notes on the level up area to match the changes made above.
I reviewed Iosef.
I added in the Skill Rank to Heal so it totaled +8. Since I think that is where he spent it. I also cleaned up the level up section a bit for the skill points.
I APPROVED Iosef for level 3.