Character Review - Page 6

Mal Malenkirk · 10th January 2009, 04:03 AM

I see. So now the title of Mal's favorite judge is up for grab!

Atanatotatos · 10th January 2009, 05:38 AM

I checked and approved Hrav (I changed a trivial error and suggested a small addition), so he now needs one more approval from a full judge.

Don Incognito · 11th January 2009, 03:50 AM

Dirge is ready for judging

Atanatotatos · 11th January 2009, 08:19 PM

I approved Quagmire, fixed a small error and suggested a completement, but it seems mostly alright.

Dunamin · 27th January 2009, 08:23 AM

Just a minor tidbit that came to mind:

When a PC has not been fully approved they can still freely go on adventuring, but aside from waiting for approval before they can be rewarded XP they may also want to hold off any shopping.

Sometimes people miscalculate how much gold they have left, so it could get tricky if they've spent too much money by the time a judge or helper notes the correct values during approval.

Atanatotatos · 27th January 2009, 02:36 PM

In this regard, would someone have some time to fully approve quagmire, since we're in the middle of an adventure and he's the last character still to be approved for lvl 2?

Edit:Nevermind, thanks a lot Dunamin

Lord Sessadore · 27th January 2009, 07:53 PM

So are we all caught up on approvals now?

I have to admit I'm a little embarrassed ... I thought we were already caught up (at least as far as us non-judge approvers (we really need to come up with some term for us, haha)), until Dunamin sent a number of approval emails, most of which seemed to be ones that already had a judge approval ...

Dunamin · 27th January 2009, 09:02 PM

Well, often its not easy to keep track of it all. Currently it seems we're missing:

Janus Reinhardt (no reviews yet)

and

Dirge (1 approval)

Atanatotatos · 12th March 2009, 09:05 PM

I just reviewed Darien Falk.

Taren:
-The skills section is missing the -1 to Dex,Str, and Con skills from the Hide armor.
-The Warrior of the Wild per-encounter quarry should go in the powers section.

I really liked the background. If you'd like, I'm recruiting for an adventure in the tavern.

taran · 13th March 2009, 04:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Atanatotatos

I just reviewed Darien Falk.

Taren:
-The skills section is missing the -1 to Dex,Str, and Con skills from the Hide armor.
-The Warrior of the Wild per-encounter quarry should go in the powers section.

I really liked the background. If you'd like, I'm recruiting for an adventure in the tavern.

Fixed! And thanks for your kind words.

Dunamin · 15th July 2009, 03:00 AM

Yes... Excellent! The Raise Thread ritual worked!

Ahem.

So, I just wanted to drop a note to the community at large, that it would be very helpful if submitted characters include the source of any character options that don't come from the PHB.

Linking to the Compendium is great for those with D&D Insider, but for the rest of us it would be nice if you guys write "Distant Advantage (PH2)" or the like, so that a DM, helper, or judge know where to look.

Boddynock · 16th July 2009, 07:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dunamin

So, I just wanted to drop a note to the community at large, that it would be very helpful if submitted characters include the source of any character options that don't come from the PHB.

Linking to the Compendium is great for those with D&D Insider, but for the rest of us it would be nice if you guys write "Distant Advantage (PH2)" or the like, so that a DM, helper, or judge know where to look.

And here was me thinking that it was just me who didn't have a subscription to DDI.

I've updated Adran Cassis to show sources.

Cheers!

Don Incognito · 17th July 2009, 06:49 PM

Not that I'm a judge or anything, but in the quick refrence at the top of his sheet, Adran should have a +7 vs AC for any and all longsword attacks, rather than +4

Dunamin · 17th July 2009, 08:31 PM

Yep, seems like you forgot to add proficiency bonus to the powers with the Weapon keyword, Boddynock.

Velmont · 17th July 2009, 09:52 PM

I have two characters waiting for approval, and only one have received comments from one judge, even if I had sent a mail for each one.

Jarel-karn has started his first adventure, so if you could put it higher in your priority table, it would be welcome.
Feyr is at the Inn, so it can wait a bit longer.

Thanks in advance to take time to finish my approval.

Boddynock · 18th July 2009, 02:29 AM

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Originally Posted by Don Incognito

Not that I'm a judge or anything, but in the quick refrence at the top of his sheet, Adran should have a +7 vs AC for any and all longsword attacks, rather than +4

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dunamin

Yep, seems like you forgot to add proficiency bonus to the powers with the Weapon keyword, Boddynock.

Thanks for the feedback. I'm a complete 4e noob, so appreciate it.

Unfortunately, I don't really understand your comments.

Adran has a Str mod of +0, and I have included the proficiency bonus of +3 for longsword, so where does the other +4 come from? It was a +7 total before I changed his Heroic Tier feat from Melee Training (Charisma) to Strength of Valor but as far as I can see, +3 is right now. What am I missing?

TwoHeadsBarking · 18th July 2009, 02:33 AM

He means with your powers, not your basic attack. Guiding Strike, Warsong Strike, and Slayer's Song should all be at +7 to hit, because they're weapon powers and get the +3 proficiency bonus.

elecgraystone · 18th July 2009, 02:39 AM

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Originally Posted by Boddynock

And here was me thinking that it was just me who didn't have a subscription to DDI.

Nope, quite a few up us don't.

And your basic attacks are just used for charges, Opportunity attacks and stuff like that. As TwoHeadsBarking said, attacks you get from your class have the stat listed that you use. For you it's Charisma.

Boddynock · 18th July 2009, 03:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TwoHeadsBarking

He means with your powers, not your basic attack. Guiding Strike, Warsong Strike, and Slayer's Song should all be at +7 to hit, because they're weapon powers and get the +3 proficiency bonus.

Quote:

Originally Posted by elecgraystone

And your basic attacks are just used for charges, Opportunity attacks and stuff like that. As TwoHeadsBarking said, attacks you get from your class have the stat listed that you use. For you it's Charisma.

Oh, OK - gotcha!

I've made those corrections, plus a couple of others I noticed. I await the next instalment on my 4e learning curve.

Dunamin · 18th July 2009, 03:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Velmont

I have two characters waiting for approval, and only one have received comments from one judge, even if I had sent a mail for each one.

Jarel-karn has started his first adventure, so if you could put it higher in your priority table, it would be welcome.
Feyr is at the Inn, so it can wait a bit longer.

Thanks in advance to take time to finish my approval.

I've just recently done Feyr, and there's a few things that needs tuning. I would have prioritized Jarel-Karn if I had seen this post before starting, though.