| Details, dude.
PC race concept - why do you think this race would make a worthwhile addition to one's campaign?
Race specific base class - what kind of a class is that? How does it scale against Arcana Evolved classes? Is it a class usable in 3.5 campaign?
Are Taurians tragic? That's a given - I've read publication preview. However, why do you think it adds to roleplaying?
The rest is ok, but all in all, your review should provide your opinion on product contents with arguments supporting your point of view. Otherwise, it's hard to find anything in your review which is not already present in preview samples.
Regards,
Ruemere |