Aeon (updated 10/9/14)

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Anabstercorian

First Post

• May 19, 2005

• #71

Fantastic! As ever you thrill me with your turgid prose and so forth. You describe high magic and fantasy with a vivid air that any professional would envy.

I wish I could play in your game. @.@

 

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Sejs

First Post

• May 20, 2005

• #72

Ortwine surveyed the land south of her walls. Trees which had sprung over the heaped corpses of fiends; the great contusions in the ground – caused when Azazel smote Irzho from the sky, and the balor had fallen like a black comet – now covered with green creepers. The chasm, caused by Soneillon's final realization of nonexistence, become a deep pool to which mist clung, with an air only of deep sorrow. Nwm's hand, at work.

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I've got to admit, I am really enjoying your approach to dealing with the time gap between the previous 'chapter' and now.

Everything old is new again. Kudos, and thank you.

 

coyote6

Adventurer

• May 20, 2005

• #73

Had to add -- I'm also liking the "some time later" approach.

Anabstercorian said:

Fantastic! As ever you thrill me with your turgid prose and so forth.

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Err, turgid prose isn't usually considered a good thing...

 

Greybar

No Trouble at All

• May 20, 2005

• #74

coyote6 said:

Err, turgid prose isn't usually considered a good thing...

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Well, the first definition isn't too bad. I must say I had the same reaction and used dictionary.com as well. I wouldn't say *excessively* ornate. But then, I enjoyed The Worm Ouroboros by E. R. Eddison

 

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Vorlon

First Post

• May 20, 2005

• #75

Glad you're back

I've been lurking here for over a year now, and I'm happy you've got the writing bug again. I originally found this site because a friend of mine introduced me to the Tales of Wyre, and while I love the story, it is YOUR story, so write it the way you want to, when you want to without feeling any pressure to appease anyone else. I don't care what you write, I don't care IF you write (lie!), but I'm glad to see you are writing again as long as you enjoy doing it.

That goes for any of the excellent story authors here.

I think I'm starting to ramble, so I'll go back to lurking now.

 

the Jester

Legend

• May 21, 2005

• #76

Hey Vorlon, welcome to the boards!

Glad to see that Sep's still bringing in new blood, whether he wants to or not...

 

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Roman

First Post

• May 25, 2005

• #77

Yay, new update! I am happy.

 

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Jackylhunter

First Post

• May 29, 2005

• #78

I've said it before, but this story, about these characters, Re-re-defines the term 'EPIC'.

Mucho kudos to Sep and his players.

 

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Jumbie

Explorer

• May 31, 2005

• #79

I just wrote the most difficult exam I've ever had in my life. I need an update to cheer me up.

@Roman - UBC Grad here. Hkin 2003.

 

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Warrior Poet

Explorer

• Jun 1, 2005

• #80

Jackylhunter said:

I've said it before, but this story, about these characters, Re-re-defines the term 'EPIC'.

Mucho kudos to Sep and his players.

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Well said.

Warrior Poet