Gray Shade
First Post
Fenris:
[sblock]Okay, Fenris. I’ve gone over Haakon more closely. Please make the following changes. If you have any questions please feel free to ask.
1. I believe his Fort Save should be +5, not +4. 2 for Savage Bard level 1 and 2 for Barbarian level 1, and +1 for his Con is +5, right?
2. Greatsword damage is 2d6, not 1d10.
3. I tried adding up his skill points but kept getting dizzy. Same goes for his hit points. Answer me this, first: Which was his level 1 class: Barbarian or Bard? If you choose Bard you get more Skill points, but if you choose Barbarian you get 1 more hp. It breaks down as follows:
Hit points:
Level 1 Barbarian = 12, +4 for Level 2 Bard, +9 for two levels of Expert, +4 for Con = 29
OR
Level 1 Bard = 6, +9 for level 2 Barbarian, +9 for two levels of Expert, +4 for Con = 28
Skill Points:
Level 1 Barbarian = 4 (base) + 2 (int) x 4 = 24 +4 (human) = 28, Plus 9 for level 2 Bard, plus 18 for two levels of Expert
OR
Level 1 Bard = 6 (base) + 2 (int) x 4 = 32 +4 (human) = 36, Plus 7 for level 2 Barbarian, plus 18 for two levels of Expert
Either way, I got a headache trying to figure out how you paid for your skills. Please list your skills again so that I can easily tell which ones were bought with which classes so that I can tell that it’s all good.
4. Note “Illiterate” in Class Features.
5. Adding up your gold, I found that you spent a little over what you had. I tell you what, though, you can keep what you’ve got (and add 6 silver and 4 copper just so he’s got something to tip with), but only because I like your style.
6. And finally, please change his equipment list so that it shows weights of items, and add an encumbrance table, as follows:
Equipment:
Masterwork Greatsword {350gp / 8 lb}
+1 Chain shirt {1,250gp / 25 lb}
MW Comp Mighty (+2) long bow {600 gp / 3 lb}
Quiver with 20 arrows {2 gp / 3 lb}
Masterwork Horn {100 gp / 3 lb}
Carving chisels {5 gp / 5 lb}
Explorer's outfit {10gp / 0 lb if worn, if carried, 5 lb}
Woolen cloak {1gp / 1 lb}
Backpack {2gp / 2 lb}
Weight carried: 55 lb
Encumbrance:
Light: 0 – 58 Medium: 59 – 116 Heavy: 117 – 175 Lift: to 350 Drag: to 875
Thanks!
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[sblock]Okay, Fenris. I’ve gone over Haakon more closely. Please make the following changes. If you have any questions please feel free to ask.
1. I believe his Fort Save should be +5, not +4. 2 for Savage Bard level 1 and 2 for Barbarian level 1, and +1 for his Con is +5, right?
2. Greatsword damage is 2d6, not 1d10.
3. I tried adding up his skill points but kept getting dizzy. Same goes for his hit points. Answer me this, first: Which was his level 1 class: Barbarian or Bard? If you choose Bard you get more Skill points, but if you choose Barbarian you get 1 more hp. It breaks down as follows:
Hit points:
Level 1 Barbarian = 12, +4 for Level 2 Bard, +9 for two levels of Expert, +4 for Con = 29
OR
Level 1 Bard = 6, +9 for level 2 Barbarian, +9 for two levels of Expert, +4 for Con = 28
Skill Points:
Level 1 Barbarian = 4 (base) + 2 (int) x 4 = 24 +4 (human) = 28, Plus 9 for level 2 Bard, plus 18 for two levels of Expert
OR
Level 1 Bard = 6 (base) + 2 (int) x 4 = 32 +4 (human) = 36, Plus 7 for level 2 Barbarian, plus 18 for two levels of Expert
Either way, I got a headache trying to figure out how you paid for your skills. Please list your skills again so that I can easily tell which ones were bought with which classes so that I can tell that it’s all good.
4. Note “Illiterate” in Class Features.
5. Adding up your gold, I found that you spent a little over what you had. I tell you what, though, you can keep what you’ve got (and add 6 silver and 4 copper just so he’s got something to tip with), but only because I like your style.
6. And finally, please change his equipment list so that it shows weights of items, and add an encumbrance table, as follows:
Equipment:
Masterwork Greatsword {350gp / 8 lb}
+1 Chain shirt {1,250gp / 25 lb}
MW Comp Mighty (+2) long bow {600 gp / 3 lb}
Quiver with 20 arrows {2 gp / 3 lb}
Masterwork Horn {100 gp / 3 lb}
Carving chisels {5 gp / 5 lb}
Explorer's outfit {10gp / 0 lb if worn, if carried, 5 lb}
Woolen cloak {1gp / 1 lb}
Backpack {2gp / 2 lb}
Weight carried: 55 lb
Encumbrance:
Light: 0 – 58 Medium: 59 – 116 Heavy: 117 – 175 Lift: to 350 Drag: to 875
Thanks!
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