I'm not making many changes, just want to try out a couple different powers for this build. For the most part the stats, feats, and powers all work for the archer build really well. The elf would've been a better choice than the eladrin, but no worries.
Trade Carefull Attack for Twin Strike
Trade Fox's Cunning for Evasive Strike
I need to fix these having read through the PHB. They appear to be typos on the character sheets.
Correct stats: Longsword +5[LS is +3 for proficiency], 1d8+3[without a shield, he'll always use it 2-handed]
Add Feats to sheet: defensive mobility & lethal hunter [missing from my character sheet version]