Lazybones's Keep on the Shadowfell/Thunderspire Labyrinth

Cerulean_Wings

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Good stuff! Loved Mara's back-story, very cool. I don't think you've done something like this in The Doomed Bastards, and I think it's a good way to explain a character's past without having them say it to another character.

And you're writing chapter 26 already? :confused: Easy, Lazybones, don't you go about getting carpal tunnel with so much story hour goodness! ;)
 

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Lazybones

Adventurer
Good stuff! Loved Mara's back-story, very cool. I don't think you've done something like this in The Doomed Bastards, and I think it's a good way to explain a character's past without having them say it to another character.
I did more of this back in the Travels days (with Lok, especially), to fill in character backstory, but I haven't used it in a while. More on Mara's history today.
And you're writing chapter 26 already? :confused: Easy, Lazybones, don't you go about getting carpal tunnel with so much story hour goodness! ;)
Heh, I type fast. I haven't done any KotS writing this week, as I'm editing TDB for a PDF release, but I have a good chunk of story and am working on the outline for the latter part of the module/story.

I haven't gotten H2, any comments from owners? I see that H3 is coming out a bit later this month as well.

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Chapter 13


Mara rubbed a towel around the back of her neck, wiping away the sweat that clung to her under her heavy tunic. She felt hot now, after the workout, but knew that the chill of the air would penetrate every tiny gap in her clothes, turning the beads of sweat into ice.

Her uncle Torvan drank deeply from a leather waterskin, and handed it over to her. She unstoppered it and drank. Growl, watching from a comfortable-looking bed of fallen pine needles short distance away, lifted his head slightly, then dropped it back down between his paws. Mara rubbed her sore arms and envied him.

She was thirteen years old.

“Tomorrow we will start you on the longer blade,” Torvan said.

Mara nodded, and put the waterskin down on the fallen log, next to her wooden practice sword. Her eyes fell to the sword that Torvan had laid against the log in its scabbard, a sleek and deadly weapon with a blade a full forty inches in length. He’d never used it in their sparring, of course, but she’d been tasked with cleaning and oiling the blade, and knew that it was without flaw, and as sharp as a razor.

“Why do you like fighting so much?” she asked him.

Torvan fixed her with the steely gaze that she’d come to know so well. “I hate fighting,” he said finally.

“But we practice so much...”

“The world that we live in is a violent one, Mara,” he said. “There are many things that would kill you, if you let them.”

“The monsters,” she said. She’d learned a lot, in her two years living with her uncle. She’d heard of such things as trolls and giants and dragons, growing up, but it was another thing entirely to know that they were real.

“Yes,” Torvan said. “But the worst by far is men. Men will present you with a pleasant face, and then smile as they slip a dagger into your back. You must always be wary, Mara. As a woman, you have something that men want, and there are those who will not shy of hurting you to get it.”

She nodded grimly.

Torvan seemed agitated at his own words, and Mara was not surprised when he stood, taking up his own practice sword. It wasn’t much bigger than hers, but in his meaty fist it seemed tiny. “Another round, before supper.”

She knew better than to protest; her uncle had no patience with complaints when it came to training. Instead she took up her sword, and headed back into the training circle. Her uncle didn’t wait, slashing his sword at her back, but she was ready for that as well, warned by his earlier words. She spun around, deflecting his stroke with her weapon, and fell back into a defensive stance.

“Good,” he said. “You can never let your guard down, Mara. For someone will be there to take advantage.”

And then there was no more talking, no sound save for the clack as their weapons met quickly and repeatedly in the circle.
 

Richard Rawen

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Cerulean_Wings said:
Good stuff! Loved Mara's back-story, very cool. I don't think you've done something like this in The Doomed Bastards, and I think it's a good way to explain a character's past without having them say it to another character.
I agree, the character backgrounds add a lot to story development, and to the attachments we (well, I) form. It's going to be hard to set aside my fondness for the 'Dar' and 'Varo' archetypes, but this "Beetle" character is adding a lot of conflict and mystery... and potential :) Me likee lol
 

Lazybones

Adventurer
Chapter 14


Mara yelled and tore her arm free of the drake’s grasp. With her other hand she pulled her shortsword out of its scabbard and whipped it up into the seam of her cloak, tearing the fabric. The other drake fell back, spitting out cloth, snarling as it pressed her again.

Mara was still outnumbered and hurt, but her companions had not been idle in those initial moments of duress. The charging drake opened its jaws to attack, but it suddenly shot up, jumping almost comically in the air, screeching in sudden pain. Beetle, all but forgotten in their ferocity in attacking Mara, had come up behind it and delivered a two-handed strike with Mara’s axe to a rather delicate part of the creature’s anatomy. The drake, dazed by the unexpected attack, landed off-balance and tried to turn around, still not quite sure where the assault had come from.

The other drake lunged at Mara before she had time to recenter her stance, but before it could bite her again the silvery streaks of witchfire exploded from its mouth and eyes. The drake, hissing in sudden pain, pressed its attack, but this time Mara easily avoided its snapping jaws.

The fighter was merciless in her counter. Hoping that Beetle could handle the distracted drake he’d drawn off for at least a few seconds, she turned her full attention to the other. Her hands and legs moved in harmony, unleashing the maneuvers that Torvan had drilled into her until they became automatic. She made her first stroke count, stabbing the tip of her sword into the muscled juncture where the creature’s left leg met its body. The drake screamed and started to draw back, but she followed with a vicious kick that knocked it sprawling.

“Hang on, Beetle!” she yelled, stepping forward to finish the bloodied foe.

A thug with a club yelled and ran at Beetle’s back, only to go down as Jaron shot an arrow through his neck. The halfling rogue was doing a fairly good job of evading the drake, which had recovered enough to recognize him as an immediate threat. Beetle had lured the drake away from its companion, and it was having a difficult time on the rocky slope. But on the other hand, Mara’s axe was an awkward weapon for the halfling to wield effectively, and after the initial strike that had so distracted it, he hadn’t really been able to hurt it.

Jaron wanted to rush to his cousin’s aid, but knew that he was far more effective here, wielding his bow. He’d clipped the gnome with an arrow, but the wily bastard had simply vanished after that, and now could be almost anywhere. The last tough had made it up to the top of the slope, and was now moving cautiously around the perimeter of the pit, thinking to come up on Jaron from his flank. The ranger was not going to be caught that easily, and the thug froze as Jaron lifted his bow, the arrowhead pointed directly at his heart.

Something whizzed by his head. His brain processed the threat and he dropped back even as a second stone glanced off of his bracer, stinging him even through the thick leather.

“Watch out, there’s a sniper!” he yelled in warning. He started to look for the new threat, scanning the brush that gathered along the far lip of the depression, but before he could see anything another stone zinged off his temple, sending a blinding flash of pain through his skull.

“Aaaah!” he yelled, as the thug rushed toward him, club raised.

Beetle echoed his cry a moment later, as the drake seized his shoulder in its jaws, lifting him off his feet. The halfling batted his axe uselessly against its thick neck, but before it could shake him into submission a black fog gathered around its head, seeping into its eyes. The drake, stunned by the curse of the dark dream, dropped Beetle and staggered several paces from the halfling. It stumbled on the rocky slope and fell onto its side, sliding roughly down to the bottom of the pit.

Fighting through the stars that flashed across his vision, Jaron lifted his bow and fired. The shaft flew through the thug’s body, and he stopped as if he’d hit a wall. His club fell from his hands, and he toppled over, landing in a tangle of twisted roots.

The ranger turned to see Beetle’s opponent trying to get up from the bottom of the pit. His cousin seemed fine, and Mara was just extracting her swords from the carcass of the first drake, looking grim but hale. Elevaren had not been hurt at all, save for the grazing hit he’d taken from the gnome’s crossbow at the start of the battle.

There was no sign of the gnome, or of the still-unseen sniper that had buffeted him with rocks. Jaron lifted his bow and put a shot into the head of the wounded drake, finishing it. He fitted another arrow to the string at once and held it, although he suspected that their remaining foes had likely fled by now.

“Is everyone all right?” Elevaren asked. Mara grumbled something as she wiped blood from her swords, favoring her battered side, while Beetle seemed none the worse for wear for his encounter, rushing down into the pit to recover his knife. Jaron kept a close eye on the downed humans, but none of them stirred; his shots had proven accurate enough this time.

“Nice shooting,” Mara said to him, before turning and following Beetle down the treacherous slope. Elevaren took his time following, but Jaron remained up at the top, making his way cautiously around the perimeter of the depression, scanning the brush for any more surprises.

Beetle was the first to find the figure concealed under a blanket at the far side of the excavation. Mara was there in a flash. “Douven!” she exclaimed, bending to slice through the prisoner’s bonds.

The old man looked all right, although his hair and clothes had been mussed and his face was smudged with dirt. Once Mara freed his hands, he pulled away the gag that had been secured over his mouth. “Mara, my dear. And Elevaren! Thank the gods that you found me. These rascals had no good end in mind for me, I fear.”

“Lucky for you that Gelira found us, and sent us to find you, you mean,” Mara said. “Gods, Douven, I thought that you were smarter. Coming out into the wilds alone like this? What were you thinking?”

“Perhaps I was thinking that I was an adult, and capable of making my own decisions,” Douven said, his tone slightly scolding. But he accepted Mara’s help in standing, and leaned on her as he regained his bearings.

“These bandits, what were they after?” Elevaren asked.

“An old mirror buried here, that supposedly dated back to the days of the Empire,” Douven explained. “Agrid wasn’t very talkative, I think that the men working for him were just hired help.”

“Agrid was the gnome, I suppose?” Mara asked.

“Yes. There was a halfling, too. Real quiet fellow.”

“Probably the sniper,” Jaron said, who’d been listening from up above. The ranger rubbed his forehead, where a spectacular bruise was already growing into what would be a painful lump.

“Did they find this mirror?” Elevaren asked.

Douven nodded. “It was over there, by those bags. They were getting ready to leave, when you came. Quite good timing, my dear.”

Mara looked at Elevaren, who poked into the bags with his staff, but the eladrin shook his head.

“Do you think that these guys were connected to the kobold bandits?” Jaron asked.

“I doubt it,” Douven said. “Gnomes and kobolds have a quite intense racial rivalry; I have never heard of them cooperating on anything. However, I do believe that Agrid was working for someone. I heard him mention the name, ‘Kalarel’ to the halfling.”

The adventurers exchanged a look, but none of them recognized the name.

“Well, we’d better get going if we’re going to get back to Winterford before dark,” Mara said. “Douven, can you walk? Are you all right?”

“Just a bit knocked around. I’ll be fine, don’t worry. Are my things in that pile? Agrid stole my locket, quite poor behavior. Oh, hello, little fellow.”

Mara shared a glance with Elevaren as Douven shook hands with Beetle, who’d come over to join them after looting the corpses of the dead humans. She looked up at Jaron. “Any sign of our missing friends?”

The ranger shook his head. “They knew how to cover their tracks.”

Mara nodded. “Well then. We’d better get back to Winterhaven. Once we’ve seen Douven returned safely, we’ll see what we can do about these bandits.”

As it turned out, however, there was no need; the bandits saw to them first.
 

Lazybones

Adventurer
Chapter 15


“Maybe those kobold bandits we fought were stragglers,” Mara said. “I examined the shields that the dragonshields were carrying, and they were old, worn. I’d heard that there was a band following a dragon in an old keep near Fallcrest that was taken out by a group of adventurers a few months back. It’s possible that these were survivors from that group.”

They were making their way back toward Winterhaven, making decent time as the afternoon sun started down on its path toward the western horizon. They were taking a more direct route this time, knowing that they’d hit the King’s Road regardless of whether their course shifted slightly from their destination. Elevaren remained back with Douven Staul, listening to the exchange between Jaron and Mara.

“I don’t think so,” the halfling said. “From what the priestess of Avendra said, Jayse was escorting a pretty strong group that included a wizard, a cleric, and a dragonborn paladin. They would have been able to handle a group twice the size of the one that attacked us.”

“So you think there’s a lair nearby?” Mara asked.

“I’m just saying that there might be more to this than we can see. Kobolds aren’t typically this aggressive. Sure, they might raid a farmstead if they think they can get away with it, but attacking armed bands of adventurers?”

“They might have a leader putting some spine into them,” Elevaren pointed out. Jaron turned and nodded at the eladrin, but then started looking around.

“Wait, where’s Beetle?”

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Beetle was enjoying their journey. The halfling, having never left Fairhollow before, was finding the world outside to be a wondrous and diverse place. There were new sights, sounds, and smells around almost every corner. Sure, there were some bad folks that had to be put down, and the town had been a little confusing, but overall the changes had been welcome ones for the diminutive halfling.

He didn’t even notice that he’d wandered off until he looked up and saw the kobold watching him, not ten feet away.

It was a skirmisher, clad in light armor with a short stabbing spear clutched in its right hand. It blinked at him.

Beetle blinked back. Then the halfling drew out his dagger, yelled at the top of his lungs, and charged at the kobold, which turned and darted away.

The kobold was fast, but Beetle kept pace, even as their path traveled through some dense brush and into a small forest. They’d only been running for about thirty seconds when the kobold led him into a small clearing ringed by ancient trees. It sprang over a small mound of scattered leaves and twigs, and darted behind a fallen log.

Beetle was only a few steps behind it. He triggered the snare in the pile of leaves and fell onto his face. He moved like an eel, slicing through the leather cords tangled in his legs with a single stroke of his dagger, and was back on his feet within three seconds.

In that time, three kobold dragonshields had emerged from behind the trees to face him. The skirmisher was still there was well, too, taunting him with a draconic laugh from behind the log.

Beetle lifted his dagger, stepped forward into a menacing stance, and then turned to run.

He found himself facing another kobold that had emerged to block the path he’d taken into the clearing. This creature, though it barely came up to his chin, radiated menace. It was clad in hides that were streaked with ochre and decorated with odd totems, and it wore an animal skull as a helmet.

Beetle recovered quickly, and started to dive past the unnatural creature. But before he could win clear, it opened its jaws wide, and sprayed a fog of acid into the halfling’s face.

Beetle staggered back, crying as the acid seared his face and burned in his eyes. He sensed something behind him and lashed out with his dagger, only to carve empty air. He never even saw the kobold that slammed the hilt of its sword into the back of his skull, and he was only semiconscious as the dragonshields ruthlessly bound him with thick leather cords.

By the time they picked him up, he was no longer aware of anything.
 


Lazybones

Adventurer
Oh noes, Beetle has been kidnapped by the armed lizards! :eek:

Still, the moment he realizes there's a kobold right in front of him is quite funny :D
I'm enjoying writing Beetle. In addition to his low Wisdom score, I deliberately chose not to give him Perception as a trained skill. Should make for some interesting situations. However, despite those weaknesses (or maybe, because of them!) he's got more than a few surprises up his sleeve, as we'll see shortly.

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Chapter 16


Jaron ran toward the sound of Beetle’s cry, heedless of the brambles that were slashing at his arms and face as he ran. Behind him, Mara and Elevaren were coming, but the fighter was weighed down by her armor, and Elevaren was likewise burdened with Douven Staul, who they were not about to leave behind. Mara shouted after him, but Jaron could only hear the fear in his cousin’s voice as it replayed in his mind, and that drove him on to run even faster.

Distances and directions could be confusing in the hills, but he thought he had a good bearing, and the shout sounded like it had been pretty close. The hills gave way to a small forest, and the underbrush quickly began to thin out as the shadows under the canopy of branches began to deepen.

Jaron began to slow down, out of necessity; his cousin could have been anywhere in here. He knew it was probably a mistake to give away his position, but he had no choice.

“Beetle?” he said, softly at first, and then again, louder. “Beetle!”

There was no answer, but he caught a hint of movement out of the corner of his eyes, far ahead through the trees. He ran in that direction. “Beetle!” As he got closer to the motion, he heard other sounds, the rustling of dead leaves, the occasional crack of a twig under a foot. More than one of them, and moving quickly.

He followed, trying to avoid betraying his position, although whoever it was already knew that he was there, from his earlier shouts. Up ahead, the ground began to rise, and the trees began to thin out.

He emerged on the edge of a broad meadow, bordered on one side by the forest, and on the other by a low ridge shaped like the curving blade of a scimitar. He was just in time to see several small figures cross over the crest of the ridge and disappear from sight.

He was about to rush after them when three dragonshields appeared out of a gully almost directly in front of him, and charged, their swords flashing in the afternoon sun.
 

Xorn

First Post
I haven't gotten H2, any comments from owners? I see that H3 is coming out a bit later this month as well.

I'm happy with it. My group will finish H1 this weekend, and I've pretty much got them set up to head north by north railroad after that right into H2. (There's a LOT of openings to hook them.) H2 is pretty non-linear, which was a nice surprise.
 

Lazybones

Adventurer
Thanks, Xorn. I may pick it up with my next Amazon order (man, there's a ton of video games coming out in the next 3 months!).

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Chapter 17


Jaron cried out as the kobold warriors swarmed him, as much out of surprise as out of a desire to alert his companions to his location. In his haste to catch up with his cousin, he’d let three very dangerous foes get the jump on him.

The first dragonshield slashed at him with its small but very sharp shortsword; Jaron felt the latter keenly as it sliced through the armor protecting his side and left a shallow gash on his torso. He almost felt it again as the second dragonshield tried to cut the hand holding onto his bow; the blow glanced off his bracer but didn’t hurt him.

He got a respite from the last kobold, but only because it circled around, obviously seeking to surround him and open up a deadly flanking situation with its brethren. Jaron sprang away before it could close the gap, coming up in a tumbling roll with an arrow already fitted to the string of his bow. The kobolds were quick, and shifted with him, but he evaded their lunges and fired an arrow point-blank into the chest of the nearest foe. The missile slammed into its heavy dragonscale armor, and while Jaron thought it had penetrated, the kobold only hissed and surged forward again with its companions.

Prudence won out, and Jaron turned and fled.

The kobolds were fast, their heavy armor of dragonscales seeming to have no effect on their speed as they darted after the halfling ranger. Jaron’s legs were short, but he was in good shape, and better at negotiating obstacles than the kobolds. He led them back into the forest, and chose a path with more such obstacles in an attempt to delay his pursuers.

For a moment, it looked like it would work. Jaron surged up a low rise that delayed the kobolds for a few precious seconds, and he sprang over a gully choked with brambles that gained him a good twenty feet as the kobolds went around. He could hear them chattering in their staccato language behind him; it didn’t look like they were planning on giving up anytime soon.

A fallen log blocked his path up ahead. Adding a burst of speed, he leapt onto it without breaking stride. Unfortunately, his luck had run out. A female badger had built her den under the far side of the log, and she’d heard their approach. As he sprang up, it surged out of its den, hissing in challenge. The log wobbled slightly under him, and he fell forward, his balance ruined. His momentum carried him forward a good five feet, but he landed hard on his belly, the wind exploding from his lungs in a sudden whoosh. His bow went flying from his hands. To add insult to injury, the badger snorted at him, ducking back into the shelter of its lair.

Jaron struggled to his feet, ignoring the sudden wobbling of his legs under him. He turned to see two of the kobolds charging around the nearer end of the log, while the last scrambled up onto it. As it saw him there, still a bit dazed, it barked something. Jaron didn’t speak Draconic, but even he could recognize the triumph in its voice.

He glanced back at his bow; no time. He managed to get his sword out in time to meet the dragonshields’ rush. Steel forged in Dambren’s forge in Fairhollow clanged loudly off the blade of the first kobold, and he darted back from the thrust of the second, which glanced off his side but failed to penetrate his armor, leaving just the makings of another bruise to his tally of wounds.

But the third kobold let out a high-pitched whelp and leapt forward off the log, swinging its sword down in a high arc. Jaron, already hard-pressed by the kobold’s companions, couldn’t fully get out of the way, and as the kobold landed its sword, backed by the considerable momentum of its leap, slammed hard into the side of his head. His leather cap saved his life, but the impact sent him hard to the ground. Bright colors flashed in his vision, and he found that he couldn’t move, couldn’t do anything but lie there as the kobolds surrounded him.

The creatures exchanged a few words, and then one of them lifted its sword to strike, its intent clear. A stray ray of sunlight filtering down through the canopy above caught the blade, causing it to glitter brightly, but Jaron could not nothing to stop the creature from putting a finish to him.
 

Cerulean_Wings

First Post
Will this wild chase lead us to the dreaded Iron Tooth?! Dun dun duuunnnn!!!

I hope it isn't Jaron's group that saves him from death, that'd be too predictable :]
 

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