Nentir Vale Prelude

I created this small prelude for campaigns set in the Nentir Vale and decided to put it on paper for others to use.

I am not always the most confidant reader and so wanted something I could read from so I hope this helps others as much as it does me. I havent done any fantasy writing since the age of ten so I would love some constructive feedback because I'm sure there are ways I could improve this

Thanks in advance!