Graf
Explorer
I took another pass at the character page. I can see you put a lot of effort into correcting small details and expanding things which is really awesome.
I cut the monsterous races on Daunton down the bugbears (who fought with shifters during pre daunton days). So they could still be in there, ploting and sneaking around, but moved most of the other races to "other islands in the shifting seas".
I added a bit about minotaurs and orcs being the decidenents of two great empires that have colapsed and that they fight.
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I've generally tried to build on everything you added; so there is now a rumored eladrin court on Kythira (instead of an actual well known elvin court).
Covaithe talked a lot about making sure that Daunton is the center in the context of Nova Imperium and I think it applies here as well.
I cut the monsterous races on Daunton down the bugbears (who fought with shifters during pre daunton days). So they could still be in there, ploting and sneaking around, but moved most of the other races to "other islands in the shifting seas".
I added a bit about minotaurs and orcs being the decidenents of two great empires that have colapsed and that they fight.
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I've generally tried to build on everything you added; so there is now a rumored eladrin court on Kythira (instead of an actual well known elvin court).
Covaithe talked a lot about making sure that Daunton is the center in the context of Nova Imperium and I think it applies here as well.