OK have went over the following characters, this is a list of things that will need correction.
Torl: Character looks good, however a couple of equipment issues.
- MW Falchion should cost you 375g, you have 425g listed.
- MW Composite Longbow should cost you 700g, you have 750g listed.
- Chain shirt +1 should cost you 1250g, you have 1100g listed.
MW for weapons is 300 + weapon cost, MW for armor is 150 + armor cost. Magic requires MW be applied.
- Enjoyed your backround.
Scartail: Character stats and such look good, but couple of corrections necessary. (Looked over the SRD variant rules on LA buying, I will allow it, but will limit the buyoff to only when you lvl up.)
-Attack adds are low. Melee should be 5 (bab 1/str 4) w/ MW being 6. Ranged should be 3 (bab 1/dex 2) w/ MW being 4.
-MW Light steel shield should be 159g, you have 309g listed.
-You may have trouble being a lizardfolk in a society that hates beastmen, but you should have fun roleplaying it
Backround is great and will help with your 'blending' into society.
Seamus: Character looks good for the most part, but I'm not done. Don't have PHB2 handy atm so the Dragon Shaman specific things, I still need to look at. So far tho, of what I've seen:
-Stats seem a bit high, You are 2 points higher than start (which I believe you have addressed in a previous post)
-Will review Dragon Shaman when I get home tonight
-Detailed backround
i like that. I have added Caerston to the map, and it is in the southlands (human territory). It resides in the central province, near the western border. Lach Saarnocht has been added as well.
Rungner: Please post in RG if you get the chance.
-Bear Totem Barbarian: DM ruling = switch out Toughness for Improved Toughness... (Any class ability that provides toughness is always substituted for Imp. Toughness in my games)
-Equipment listed (already let ya know this, just put it in here as a reminder)
-Looks good stat wise, although no backround at this time.