Aura
Explorer
Reviewing Aszar "Fishytail" Kzolp
Aszar looks good. There was a significant gold issue stemming from the saddle being accidentally listed as 30 sp when it was, in fact, 30 gp. (Although you still have enough to cover the expense.) Plus, there were minor issues:[sblock=Disclosure]Bit and Bridle cost increased to 2 gp; formatted gear to make it obvious saddle and bridle are associated with mount; total gold spent corrected to 130.5 gp; cash remaining corrected to 19.5 gp; Range of spear corrected to 20'; added a note to natural AC showing familiar's contribution; a few minor text clean-ups[/sblock]
Notes:
- If you wanted to have 30' range on your spears, you might consider adding some javelins to the mix. However, they do a little less damage. Your choice.
- With three different +2's from your race, it's a shame Int wasn't one of them. However, it results in some nice supporting stats, and that's alright, too.
- In some ways, the background almost makes one feel like the turtle is the boss of the duo.
Anyway, Aszar has his second APPROVAL and is ready to play! Have fun.
Aszar looks good. There was a significant gold issue stemming from the saddle being accidentally listed as 30 sp when it was, in fact, 30 gp. (Although you still have enough to cover the expense.) Plus, there were minor issues:[sblock=Disclosure]Bit and Bridle cost increased to 2 gp; formatted gear to make it obvious saddle and bridle are associated with mount; total gold spent corrected to 130.5 gp; cash remaining corrected to 19.5 gp; Range of spear corrected to 20'; added a note to natural AC showing familiar's contribution; a few minor text clean-ups[/sblock]
Notes:
- If you wanted to have 30' range on your spears, you might consider adding some javelins to the mix. However, they do a little less damage. Your choice.
- With three different +2's from your race, it's a shame Int wasn't one of them. However, it results in some nice supporting stats, and that's alright, too.
- In some ways, the background almost makes one feel like the turtle is the boss of the duo.
Anyway, Aszar has his second APPROVAL and is ready to play! Have fun.
