Character Submission Thread
a/b)FIXED Feat was swapped for toughness in the stats, but not in the feat list.
c)FIXED Swapped trait for "Power of Suggestion" FIXED
d)FIXED Birth name changed to Richie Jocar, creation of the pseudonym "Jericho Calivaire" added to event in background, references to "Jerix" updated. FIXED
e)FIXED Will work to make it more cohesive, with sprinkled references and easter eggs.
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Satin Knights
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Well, you bought some different weapons, and then changed your living status. But, the finances and weapon stats blocks didn't get updated. So, a little more work for Jericho's sheet.
Satin Knights
First Post
Jericho has his first APPROVAL of two. Any other player can do the second approval. They can even earn 0.1 DMC for doing it now. (I think we approved that change.)
Aura
Explorer
Reviewed Jericho. The alignment threw me off, but turned out to be an archetype modification. Noticed Deity is listed as 'Deity', could list as none or agnostic for clarity, so it doesn't seem like omission. Everything adds up to the best of my knowledge.
STAMP! Second (non-judge) APPROVAL of 2. You can get tot he Dunn Wright Inn to pick up an upcoming adventure.
PS: Changed to 'Approved Characters' and edited to include my approval stamp.
STAMP! Second (non-judge) APPROVAL of 2. You can get tot he Dunn Wright Inn to pick up an upcoming adventure.
PS: Changed to 'Approved Characters' and edited to include my approval stamp.
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Aura
Explorer
Reviewing Qalabash:
I could find no mechanical/mathematical errors, notable omissions, etc. Further, I like the overall feel of the character. So, just a few comments:
1) Improved Trip is one of those feats that raises caution flags in my head when I see it.
1a) Tripping is noted both in CMB and weapon sections. Is this intentional?
2) His background doesn't lend itself to the Swim skill, I'd personally trade it in for the next highest item on the short list.
3) Words I had to look up: peregrinations, garrulous.
4) Short background + open = a guy that likes to swing with what the DM dreams up.
None of the above are stoppers, so:
STAMP! Qalabash gets his first, non-judge APPROVAL of 2.
I could find no mechanical/mathematical errors, notable omissions, etc. Further, I like the overall feel of the character. So, just a few comments:
1) Improved Trip is one of those feats that raises caution flags in my head when I see it.
1a) Tripping is noted both in CMB and weapon sections. Is this intentional?
2) His background doesn't lend itself to the Swim skill, I'd personally trade it in for the next highest item on the short list.
3) Words I had to look up: peregrinations, garrulous.
4) Short background + open = a guy that likes to swing with what the DM dreams up.
None of the above are stoppers, so:
STAMP! Qalabash gets his first, non-judge APPROVAL of 2.
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