Pathfinder 1E My campaign

I have never written a campaign before, and am interested in some honest criticism about what I've written so far and what could be changed. I have been using an app on my phone called Pocket Game Master. Starting with Act 1, then Act 2, then it is the players choice for path 1. Each one is detailed depending on what the players decide to do. I've noticed they are readable using Microsoft word. Would love feedback and if there is anything you don't understand I would be glad to explain it. Players are starting out at level 5. My email is punkysbullfrog at Hotmail. Please use the subject heading "Dolverk". thanks.

I've always just had a general idea of what i wanted to happen and guided the players through. Though my players like a sand box type world.