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    What do you think of this Kickstarter page?

    Before this goes public (a month or so away) I wanted to get some thoughts from you guys.

    https://www.kickstarter.com/projects...token=cedff39d

    The card image graphics near the bottom are placeholders right now, so ignore those, and we'll have another couple of page spreads plus at least one full class in PDF for free on the page. But any constructive feedback would be welcomed!

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    Good, but I dont like the font. Sorry.

    Among other things, thats a terrible c.

    (Also the Bloodweaver looks like Orko)

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    Orko is clearly a bloodweaver.

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    I second that the font for the "c" looks weird. I would not purchase "A Tough More Glass".
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    Thirding A Tough More Glass.

    For the cover art, a party of characters cautiously exploring some ruin full of hidden dangers, displaying their unique talents always piques my curiosity more than static poses

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    I didn't think I would complain about font, but yet, here I am - that C has to be tweaked.

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    A Tough More Glass?? Yeah, those Cs needs some work.

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    Morrus,
    Do you want comments here or on the kickstarter preview page?

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    Quote Originally Posted by dave2008 View Post
    Morrus,
    Do you want comments here or on the kickstarter preview page?
    Either is fine!

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    In general the KS looks really good. Very informative and it is clear you've got the product ready to go. You got a load of samples that are helpful. I really only have two comments at this time:

    1) I didn't see any information about shipping costs. Is that included in the cost or paid separately. This is usually something that is explained on a KS page.

    2) I feel the first sentence of this paragraph is a bit "full," maybe revise the word choice a bit?

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