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Originally Posted by The Axe  EN, your writing was pretty good already at the beginning of the story hour, but I think it's clear you're really improving! |
I suspect that it's more that the story itself has become more interesting, rather than any improvement on my part (there's only so many ways to describe casting sleep...) but thanks.
And thanks for all of the bumps during the long delays between posts - I've cracked the page on the next update at least and have it mostly mapped out. I just need to sit down and finish it. Maybe throwing that out there will motivate me to get it done...
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