OK, time to go over characters finally!!
Roronoa -
Your Jump check should have a +20 speed bonus, not 16, thus it should be +87. otherwise Looks GTG.
Rathan -
Your speed is a bit high. Remember that wearing medium armour reduces your base speed to 20, which would then be increased by your barbarian and boot bonuses.
I see your bow listed as +2 comp. Longbow +7, I assume from the pricing that this is +2 magic, +7 str bonus from composite, correct?
By my count you should only have 137 gp remaining.
Onlythestrong -
I'd like to have your actual character in the rogues gallery rather than a link to another site. I understand you won't be able to post it looking like the classic 'character sheet', but a quick glance at other people's sheets will give you a good basic outline you could use to transcribe it.
As far as the actual stats go:
First, you should have 20,000 GP remaining by my count.
Don't forget that your shirt of strength and ring of nat armour/protection actually cost less due to having to be crafted. (Who's crafting them btw?)
Your AC has a few issues:
13 armour bonus listed, but I only see bracers +8. Where's the other 5 coming from?
Also, you have +10 misc.. +9 wisdom/+1 insight?
Where are you adding the monk lvl bonus? Is that why your armour says +13?
I see you have boots of striding and springing, but unfortunately they do not stack with the monk's speed bonus. Both are enhancement bonuses, thus you use whichever is greater, they don't add together (Like named bonuses never stack unless they are dodge bonuses or specifically say that they DO stack)
You forgot to add the speed bonus to your jump check (With a speed of 90', Tagret should have a +24 misc modifier to his jump checks)
You don't have languages known listed, and you need to point out when you actually write out the sheet how each of your stats got to what it was (Base, enhancement, lvl, inherent, racial, etc).
Ethandrew -
Your Cold Iron Bastard sword should cost 35 gp more (You forgot to double the base cost for it being cold iron), and your bow should cost 1000 more (the base MW Composite(+6) Long bow will cost 1,000 by itself, +2000 for magic.)
You should have 57,295 gp remaining
Your HP should be 243
Your Initiative is listed as +11, but I only see 10 dex.
I do have one mechanical suggestion: Find a way to get yourself at least 5 ranks in tumble. It's always a useful skill to have (Especially for a finesseful fighter), AND it gives you a good option in fighting defensively (Which is made even better by your Two-weapon defense feats). With 5 ranks in tumble, you could fight defensively to take a -4 atk penalty for a +6 ac bonus: Better than expertise.
Voidrazor -
As I asked OnlytheStrong, I'd prefer a sheet actually in the rogues gallery over an external link.
Now, to the meat: First, I don't recall allowing Lion Totem Barbarian - I usually say no to this b/c I dislike pounce, if you could point out where I said OK, then you can keep it. Otherwise, no pouncing.
By my counting you should have 91,855 gp remaining.
Is the 'Efficient quiver' Just a renamed quiver of ehlonna?
What are Spellsight Spectacles?
Why do you have Skillful on your weapon? Your BAB is allready better than what it gives you. Also I'm not sure why you made your weapons sizing, as they'd be rather difficult to wield while you're a bear, and I don't see any other way of changing your size.
Why do you have a +7 misc mod to saves? If that's your paladin charisma bonus it should be +9 for your 28 Charisma.
Also, you should have a +4 initiative, not +3 (It's a Dex check and your ioun stone adds +1 to ability checks)
Also, you need to point out when you actually write out the sheet how each of your stats got to what it was (Base, enhancement, lvl, inherent, racial, etc). I notice you're including the warshaper bonus to str/con in your listed stats. This is innapropriate, as you only gain the warshaper abilities WHEN you're shifted into another form, they are not permanent.
Shayuri -
You forgot to craft your Vest of Resistance, you have it listed as bought normally, but it's not a core item.
You and your cohort have spent too much money. You've spent 265,740 on your cohort, but a lvl 18 NPC only gets 130,000. I figured the rest of it may have been from you, but a look over your gear shows that you spent 991,090 gp on your own gear, and have listed 9625 left (Should be 8910).
Cohort issues:
Your cohort also has an uncrafted +5 Vest of Resistance
HP Should be 106 (6 first HD, 48 for 12d6, 52 for 18 con)
Ref Save: Should be 22 (Base 8 + 9 Dex + 5 Resistance)
Rpgramen -
It's JEMAL, only 1 A, please. Someone mispells my name every second day, and it makes me kinda twitchy.
I noticed you have several Non-Core Items, but don't have them listed as being crafted. In order to have non-core items, they must be crafted by a PC crafter. I also need to know where they're from and what they do before that's allowed, too.
Infinite Scrollcase (2800gp)
Field Provisions Box (2000gp)
+5 Glamered Mithral Breastplate of Elusion (76,700gp)
Spool of Endless Rope (4500gp)
Heward's Fortifying Bedroll (2000gp)
Armbands of Might (4100gp)
Also, your Vest of Resistance requires crafting as well, for having a different-than-printed slot.
Too many languages, Should get Common +3 (Base 16 Int)
You've spent 11,513gp too much
EVERYBODY:
I noticed this on a lot of sheets so I figured I'd point it out here :
Don't forget that your speed modifies your jump check. -6 for each 10' below 30, +4 for each 10' above 30. This is not counted in the +5 from the boots of striding and springing (The +5 is part of the 'springing')
OH, and BTW, as it IS a high level campaign, and I guarantee it'll come up:
Who can partake in/contribute to aerial combat without aid from another party member, and how?
And Finally, I'd like to start this game pretty soon, So I'd like to have all characters finallized(Stats and background) by next tuesday (the 12th), so I can start the game either that night or the next day (As those're my days off)
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