L4W:PC:Dane Thoradin (Nebten)

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Contents 1 Summary 2 Fluff 2.1 Background 2.2 Appearance and personality 2.3 Region 2.4 Hooks 2.5 Kicker 2.6 Recent Adventures 3 Show Math 3.1 Ability Scores 3.2 Attacks 3.3 Defenses 3.4 Senses and Reactions 3.5 Health 3.6 Speed and Movement 3.7 Racial Features 3.8 Class Features 3.9 Feats 3.10 Skills and Languages 3.11 Powers 3.12 Powers Known 3.13 Powers to Hit 4 Equipment 5 Tracking 5.1 Treasure 5.2 XP 5.3 Changes 6 Judge Comments 6.1 Level 1 6.1.1 Approval 1 6.1.2 Approval 2 6.2 Level 2 6.2.1 Approval 1 6.2.2 Approval 2 6.3 Status

Summary

Dane Thoradin	Player Nebten
Dwarf Fighter (Good)	Level 2 (XP 1612)
Initiative +1
Passive Insight 13 Passive Perception 13; Senses Low-light Vision
HP 42 Bloodied 21 Surge Value 10; Surges Per-Day 12
AC 20 Fortitude 18 Reflex 14 Will 14
Speed 5 Size Medium
Str 18 (+4) Dex 11 (+0) Wis 15 (+2) Con 16 (+3) Int 10 (+0) Cha 8 (-1)
Racial Abilities Cast-Iron Stomach, Dwarven Resilience, Dwarven Weapon Proficiency, Encumbered Speed, Stand Your Ground
Class Features Combat Challenger, Combat Superiority, Fighter Weapon Talent (1-handed weapon)
Basic Attack Reckless Waraxe +1 +9 vs AC 1d12+7 damage
Ranged Basic Attack Handaxe +8 vs AC 1d6+6
Feats Dwarven Weapon Training, Toughness
Skills Acrobatics -1, Arcana +1, Athletics +8, Bluff +0, Diplomacy +0, Dungeoneering +5, Endurance +10, Heal +8, History +1, Insight +3, Intimidate +0, Nature +3, Perception +3, Religion +1, Stealth -1, Streetwise +0, Thievery -1
Languages Common, Dwarven
Rituals N/A
Powers

Brash Strike (At Will Standard Melee weapon ✦ Martial, Weapon)

Target: One creature

Attack: +11 vs. AC

Hit: 1d12+10 damage (When wielding an axe deals extra damage equal to Constitution modifier (+3).

Effect: You grant combat advantage to the target until the start of your turn.

Cleave (At Will Standard Melee Weapon ✦ Martial, Weapon)

Target: One Creature

Attack: +9 vs. AC

Hit: 1d12+7 damage and an enemy adjacent to you other than the target takes 4 damage

Shield Bash (Encounter Standard Melee 1 ✦ Martial)

Requirement: Must be using a shield.

Target: One Creature

Attack: +7 vs. Reflex

Hit: 1d10+6 damage, push target 1 square and knock it prone.

Special: When charging, you can use this power in place of a melee basic attack. If you are a dwarf, the attack deals extra damage equal to your Wisdom modifier (+2).

Knee Breaker (Daily Standard Melee Weapon ✦ Invigorating, Martial, Weapon)

Target: One creature

Attack: +9 vs. AC

Hit: 2d12+10 damage, and the target is slowed (save ends). If the target is already slowed, it is instead immobilized (save ends). If wielding an axe, the attack deals extra damage equal to your Constitution modifier (+3). Dane gains 3 temporary hit points.

Miss: Half damage, and the target is not slowed or immobilized.

Shielded Sides (Encounter Minor Personal ✦ Martial, Utility)

Requirement: Must be using a shield.

Effect: Until the end of your next turn, you gain +2 power bonus to to AC and Reflex and do not grant combat advantage to creatures flanking you.

Reckless Waraxe +1 (Heroic) (At-Will Free Critical 1d8 damage )	Magic Weapon
Effect: Use this power before making a melee attack against an adjacent target. You gain a power bonus to that attack's damage roll equal to twice this weapon's enchancement bonus (+2). You take a -2 pentality to AC until the end of your next turn.

Heavy Shield of Protection (Heroic) (Daily Standard )	Magic Armor
Effect: You and an adjacent ally gain resist 10 to all damage until the end of your next turn.

Fluff

Background

Dane Thoradin came from a rich merchant's house Mykonos' Sanctuary. He grew up enjoying the finer aspects in life and at such a young age understood the true value of gold. He did not do well in general studies and his tutor scolded him for not living up to his potential. His father always laugh after Dane's tutor stormed off in a fury knowing that books did not lie in his son's future.

Dane had two older sisters and one younger brother. They played and grew together as expected for dwarves of their station. It was their mother who stood out from the rest. She was the youngest of another merchant house married more for political reason then for love. While there was a mutual respect by all members of the family, the mother remained distant.

It was a single night that altered the paths of the Thoradin clan. Dane's father was out late due to business. When he returned, he was greeted by only one crying child. Dane held his father's bloodied axe mumbling for forgiviness. Dane tried to explain what he saw and what he had to do but the sight of his father only made things worse. His father could only take in that his children have been slain in their beds while his deceased wife laid at Dane's feet. To this day, it is not known as to why Dane's mother killed her babes while they slept. Nor is it known what Dane saw in his mother's eyes knowing that not "everything will be OK." It is only known that this day, Dane and his father fled their previous lives and that House of Thoradin fell.

Appearance and personality

Age: 56
Gender: Male
Height: 4'3"
Weight: 174 lb.
Alignment: Good
Personality: Dane is a good natured soul who has a neutral outlook on life. He values his family just as much as his gold. His education was cut short early in life but he made up for it with physical prowless by having to restart his life within the wild. Dane likes protect the little guy and feariously defends his friends & family in either verbal or physical combat. Most of Dane's ambisions have left him, he's just a dwarf trying to do the right things and a little coin doesn't hurt. Apperance: Dane's current adventuring gear include scale mail and a heavy shield. These are mostly accented with different shades of brown, Dane's favorite color. His only weapon is a waraxe which he wields as effortlessly as his own right arm.

Region

Mykonos Sanctuary[1] - +1 endurance checks, reflecting the toughness they developed working as slaves in the mines over their year of torment; the constant psychic bombardments suffered by the survivors has also granted them a degree of resilience, in times of extreme exertion they can sometimes shake off debilitating mental effects. When a player character from Mykonos' Sanctuary spends an action point they may immediately make one save against a any effect with the psychic keyword that a save could end.

Hooks

• Hook 1: Wererat guild is after him after defeating them and taking back the Sibylline Idol
• Hook 2

Kicker

• Mother's side of the family looking for Dane.

Recent Adventures

The Sibylline Idol Dane was hired on to search down a mysterious "Sibylline Idol" for a mystical Sage. This idol had unholy powers which drew unseele creatures to it and slowly took over the minds of those who are in retain it. The party Dane joined with was able to obtain the Idol from a gang of Wererats and destroy it and outer-world portal that laid under the city. In the end, Dane was right about this being a "rat smashing job," and was able to surive the day to get a hot meal with his hard earned coin. His companions were: Incarnation - warforged warlock, Riardon d'Cealis - eladrin warlord, Rurdev - shifter ranger, & Vashik One Eye.

Show Math

Ability Scores

Attributes
Ability	Cost	Initial	Racial	Level	Final	Mod
Str	16	18	0	0	18	4
Con	5	14	2	0	16	3
Dex	1	11	0	0	11	0
Int	0	10	0	0	10	0
Wis	3	13	2	0	15	2
Cha	0	8	0	0	8	-1
Totals	25					8

Attacks

Basic Attacks

Attack Type

Attrib

Attrib Type

Class

Class Feature

Feat

Feat Name

Equip

Equip Name

Misc

Misc Name

Level

Total

vs?

Basic Melee

4

str

1

One-Handed Weapon Talent

3

Reckless Waraxe +1

1

9

AC

Basic Ranged

4

str

1

One-Handed Weapon Talent

2

Handaxe

1

8

AC

Defenses

Defenses

Defense

Attrib

Attrib Type

Class

Racial

Feat

Feat Name

Equip

Equip Name

Misc

Misc Name

Level

Total

Armor Class

+0/+0

dex/int

9

Scale Mail & Heavy Shield of Protection

1

20

Fortitude

+4/+3

str/con

2

1

Amulet of Protection +1

1

18

Reflex

+0/+0

dex/int

3

Heavy Shield of Protection & Amulet of Protection +1

1

14

Will

+2/-1

wis/cha

1

Amulet of Protection +1

1

14

Saving Throw Bonuses +5 vs Poison

Senses and Reactions

Senses and Reactions
Sense/Reaction	Attrib mod	Class	Class Feature	Racial	Feat	Feat Name	Equip	Equip Name	Level	Other/Trained	Total
Initiative	0	0	0	0	0	0	0	0	1	0	1
Passive Insight	2	0	0	0	0	0	0	0	1	0	13
Passive Perception	2	0	0	0	0	0	0	0	1	0	13

Health

Health
--	Base Class	Con	Per Level	Racial	Feat	Feat Name	Equip	Equip Name	Other	Total	Blooded	Surge
Hit Points	15	16	6	0	5	Toughness	0			42	21	10

Surges per Day 12 (Class 9 + Con 3)

Speed and Movement

Speed: 5 (Race 5 - Equipment 0)

Racial Features

• Cast-Iron Stomach: +5 racial bonus to saving throws vs poison
• Dwarven Resilience: You can use second wind as a minor action
• Dwarven Weapon Proficiency: You gain proficiency with the throwing hammer and warhammer.
• Encumbered Speed: Move at normal speed when it would otherwise be reduced by armor or heavy load
• Stand Your Ground
• +2 to Constitution, +2 to Wisdom
• Size: Medium
• Speed: 5
• Vision: Low-Light
• Languages: Common, Dwarven

Class Features

• +2 Fort
• Combat Challenge
• Combat Superiority
• Fighter Weapon Talent (+1 with 1-handed weapons)

Feats

• Dwarven Weapon Training, Toughness

Skills and Languages

Languages Common, Dwarven

Skills
Skill	Trained	Attrib	Attrib Type	Racial	Feat	Feat Name	Equip	Equip Name	Level	Total
Acrobatics		0	dex				-2	Armor Penality	1	-1
Arcana		0	int						1	1
Athletics	5	4	str				-2	Armor Penality	1	8
Bluff		-1	cha						1	0
Diplomacy		-1	cha						1	0
Dungeoneering		2	wis	2					1	5
Endurance	5	3	con	2	1	Mykonos Sanctuary Region	-2	Armor Penality	1	10
Heal	5	2	wis						1	8
History		0	int						1	1
Insight		2	wis						1	3
Intimidate		-1	cha						1	0
Nature		2	wis						1	3
Perception		2	wis						1	3
Religion		0	int						1	1
Stealth		0	dex				-2	Armor Penality	1	-1
Streetwise		-1	cha						1	0
Thievery		0	dex				-2	Armor Penality	1	-1

Powers

Powers Known

• Fighter
• At-Will - 1st Level
  • Brash Strike
  • Cleave
• Encounter - 1st Level
  • Shield Bash
• Daily - 1st Level
  • Knee Breaker
• Encounter - 2nd level
  • Shielded Sides

  Powers to Hit

  Power To-Hit
  Attack Type	Attrib	Attrib Type	Class	Class Feature	Feat	Feat Name	Equip	Equip Name	Level	Total	vs?
  Brash Strike	+6	Str+2	+1	Fighter Weapon Talent			+3	Reckless Waraxe +1	1	11	AC
  Cleave	+4	Str	+1	Fighter Weapon Talent			+3	Reckless Waraxe +1	1	9	AC
  Shield Bash	+6	Str+2					+0	Shield of Protection	1	7	Ref
  Knee Breaker	+4	Str	+1	Fighter Weapon Talent			+3	Reckless Waraxe +1	1	9	AC

  
  

  Equipment

  Equipment Name	Price	Weight
  Scale Armor	45gp	45bs
  Heavy Shield of Protection	680gp	15lbs
  Amulet of Protection +1	360gp
  Reckless Waraxe +1	680gp	10lbs
  Handaxe (4)	20gp	12lbs
  Standard Adventurer's Kit	15gp	33lbs
  Heavy Shield	10gp	(Stored)
  Waraxe	30gp	(stored)
  Total		115 lbs

  
  

  Gold 2
  Weight 115 lbs
  

  Tracking

  Treasure

  • 382 gp, Heavy Shield of Protection, Level 3 Magic item (Reckless Waraxe +1), Bought 4 Handaxes (-20 gp) & Amulet of Protection +1 (-360 gp) The Sibylline Idol

  XP

  • 112 The Sibylline Idol
  • 577 The Sibylline Idol
  • 100 The Sibylline Idol
  • 419 The Sibylline Idol
  • 404 The Sibylline Idol Level 2

  Total XP: 1612

  Changes

  05/06/09: Edited to update XP and to correct Endurance modifier. I forgot to add my background bonus.

  06/09/09: Updated XP

  09/16/09: Updated XP

  10/19/09: Updated XP, Updated Treasure, Leveled PC to 2

  Judge Comments

  Level 1

  Approval 1

  Reviewed by JoeNotCharles

  Removed comments from Dunamin that have been fixed.

  1. The skill numbers in the Math section are correct, but in the summary, Dungeoneering, Heal, Insight, Nature and Perception are off by 1. Since the Math is right, I'll just go ahead and fix them.

  Approved for level 1.

  Approval 2

  Comments from Lord Sessadore:

  Removed comments that no longer apply.

  Everything looks good to me now. Neat backstory; I like it :)

  I approve Dane for 1st level.

  Level 2

  Approval 1

  Reviewed by renau1g

  • Brash Strike - Remove "equal to Constitution modifier" and just have the +3, also add Extra damage to clear up wording
  • Shield Bash - Remove "equal to Wisdom modifier" and just have the +2
  • Knee Breaker - Remove "equal to Constitution modifier" and just have the +3

  Other than that looks good. Minor things so I approve/

  Approved for level 2.

  Approval 2

  Comments from TwoHeadsBarking:

  • Summary: You should remove the Dwarf clause from Shield Bash.
  • Summary: Under the Reckless Waraxe, you should remove the "twice this weapon's enhancement bonus" and just leave the number.
  • Fluff: "His only weapon is a waraxe which he wields as effortlessly as his own right arm" is no longer accurate.
  • Attacks: Check Kendrick Kent's sheet to see how to get your RBA to work with strength.

  Small stuff, so approved.

  Status

  Status: Approved as 1st level character with 0 xp by Lord Sessadore and JoeNotCharles

  Status: Approved as a 2nd level character with 1612 xp by renau1g and TwoHeadsBarking.