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jonesy · Jul 19, 2019

trappedslider said:
what spelling mistakes? Nothing is flagged for being spelled wrong.

Well, ignoring the question of when is a comma or semicolon missing or not (since that can be a story telling style decision):
- line 9: missing word "as" after word "smiled"
- line 17: personally I'd place a second "that" after the single one
- line 17: replace "mentaly" with "mentally"
- line 18: replace "need" with "needed" as otherwise the sentence has a time frame mixup
- third to last paragraph has the word "theartics"

trappedslider · Jul 19, 2019

jonesy said:
Well, ignoring the question of when is a comma or semicolon missing or not (since that can be a story telling style decision):
- line 9: missing word "as" after word "smiled"
- line 17: personally I'd place a second "that" after the single one
- line 17: replace "mentaly" with "mentally"
- line 18: replace "need" with "needed" as otherwise the sentence has a time frame mixup
- third to last paragraph has the word "theartics"

here's what i love about google docs, you can flag things with a comment,instead of having to say line whatever,makes it so much easier for the writer. The last one easy to find since it was the last word.

Aeson · Jul 19, 2019

Why do flat earthers always pick on NASA? Other countries have space programs. India recently tried launching a craft bound for the moon. They had to abort for technical problems.

Aeson · Jul 20, 2019

I'm never getting married. I'm just going to find a woman I don't like, and buy her a house.

Aeson · Jul 20, 2019

No one warned me when I took this job about all the kamikaze deer doing strafing runs across the street. So far I have avoided them I did have a young buck run in front of me tonight. He just ran full steam ahead. I have gotten into the habit of looking for others in the direction the deer came from.

megamania · Jul 21, 2019

Aeson said:
Why do flat earthers always pick on NASA? Other countries have space programs. India recently tried launching a craft bound for the moon. They had to abort for technical problems.

Aliens apologize. They would not have done that if they had known we were trying to free their POW from Area 51

megamania · Jul 21, 2019

and remember.... where there is one deer there will be more and deer are social creatures...… "I made it across- wait my friends are still on the other side....

megamania · Jul 21, 2019

I am teaching my son how to drive. Last night he insisted on driving..... First night time, First heavy rain and in Bennington (pop 12,000+ vs our home Arlington 2500).

We survived. Deer survived.

Aeson · Jul 22, 2019

megamania said:
and remember.... where there is one deer there will be more and deer are social creatures...… "I made it across- wait my friends are still on the other side....

That's why I always look where the first one came from.

Aeson · Jul 22, 2019

I don't know if I agree with the casting for First Man. Buzz Aldrin 50 years later has more hair than the man playing him. I think Ryan Gosling wasn't the best Choice for Armstrong either.