jonesy
A Wicked Kendragon
Well, ignoring the question of when is a comma or semicolon missing or not (since that can be a story telling style decision):what spelling mistakes? Nothing is flagged for being spelled wrong.
- line 9: missing word "as" after word "smiled"
- line 17: personally I'd place a second "that" after the single one
- line 17: replace "mentaly" with "mentally"
- line 18: replace "need" with "needed" as otherwise the sentence has a time frame mixup
- third to last paragraph has the word "theartics"