Well, lets to do this thing. I have been working an adventure for quite a while now, and think that I've got the first part to a point where it is presentable enough to share. I'm quite nervous posting this as English isn't my first language and since this is my first adventure. I know I'm new on these forums, but I hope some of you are willing to look over what I've been working on. Any feedback is welcome; though obvious things like the maps not being final and the grammatical error are not what I'm trying to get out of this. Hope you can give me your thoughts on the design, word use, descriptions etc. That said, when in doubt, put it down below.
This is part one of the adventure. Players start at 1st level. If bits seem over explained it is because I am targeting new DMs. There are a lot more handholds and in depth sections planned as part of the introduction. There might be some background info that is missing from npcs or locations, please let me know. I've got most of those written down for the introduction and separate in depth section, but I still might have glanced over some things.
Here goes nothing: https://drive.google.com/file/d/11E6iZgX0JOBf-eeeG8FUKErgfEuLV_OX/view?usp=sharing
This is part one of the adventure. Players start at 1st level. If bits seem over explained it is because I am targeting new DMs. There are a lot more handholds and in depth sections planned as part of the introduction. There might be some background info that is missing from npcs or locations, please let me know. I've got most of those written down for the introduction and separate in depth section, but I still might have glanced over some things.
Here goes nothing: https://drive.google.com/file/d/11E6iZgX0JOBf-eeeG8FUKErgfEuLV_OX/view?usp=sharing