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Message: <blockquote data-quote="crazy_monkey1956" data-source="post: 4503425" data-attributes="member: 49514">Inspection Time!New CharactersLucius, Human Cleric (player: EximiusNero) - By my calculations you should have 15.5 hp (8 + 2 Con at 1st level, 3.5 + 2 Con at 2nd level).  You appear to have one more skill point to spend (12 at 1st level, 3 at 2nd level).  Looks like you have too many 1st level spells prepared.  Should be 2, +1 bonus spell for Wisdom, +1 domain spell.  Background looks good.  Having a junior initiate of the Order of Illumination around should make things interesting.  <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin    :D"  data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" />Rungner Bearpaw, Half-Ogre Barbarian (player: bedford) - If I could get a breakdown of how you spent your skill points, that would be helpful.  Your greataxe stats are correct but it wouldn't be a "huge" greataxe, just a "large" one.  Rennaldo D'Argaussi, Human Swashbuckler (player: Scott DeWar) - You appear to have 3 skill points left to spend (4 + 2 Int x4 = 24 +4 for being human at 1st level then 4 +2 Int +1 for being human at 2nd level for a total of 35).  Physical description is great (very musketeer-ish) but a pain to read with the formatting.  As for background, what were the circumstances of his being recruited into Lady Anovia's elite guard and the shadow knights?Returning CharactersAohdan, Centaur (player: Yttermayn) - Looks good.  What has our resident centaur been up to for the past couple of months?Johen, Human Druid (player: Amaury) - Not sure from your sheet where you spent your 3rd level skill points (or what all of the modifiers are supposed to represent for that matter).  A little clarification would be supremely helpful.  Also, the Augment Summoning feat requires Spell Focus (Conjuration) so you'll need to pick a different feat.  Other than that, looks good.  What has he been up to for the past couple of months?Valen, Human Ranger (player: Valen) - I'm counting 2 too many skill points, but it's difficult to see exactly where you spent them also.  Clarification would be helpful.  What has Valen been up to?  Have he and Aleera developed their relationship at all?Muzdum, Mountain Dwarf Fighter (player: Voda Vosa) - Looks like you haven't spent your 3rd level skill points yet as you are under by 4.  Remember to change the bracers of armor+1 to a cloak of resistance+1 on your character sheet.  What has our resident dwarf been doing lately?Alaric, Human Wizard (player: Arkhandus) - As always, I absolutely love all of the nitpicky detail on the character sheet (I ought to give out bonus XP for that <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />).  What language does your raven speak?Other NotesI'd like to request that everyone have the minor corrections and clarifications noted above done by the 16th.  Also, those who are still planning on submitting a character, the 16th is still the cut-off date.</blockquote>

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