D&D 3.x ISO Feedback: Myconians (with 3.5e Stats!)

_Michael_

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So, I finally got the myconians together, and I think they turned out pretty cool. Would love to hear what y'all think for a cool subterranean race. This is being created in Affinity Publisher 2 which is why the page numbers start at 1--I'm making each chapter its own file and will stitch them all together using AP's Book function. Artwork is AI (I'm too poor to afford illustrators, especially for the amount of art I'm including, so please, no hate--I can only do what I can do).

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On a very quick skim, the "Hit Dice" in the Amyna's stat block should be in bold. Other than that, I'm not catching any obvious errors (which is meant to be a compliment, since I've seen a lot of stat blocks where mistakes jump out even on a casual overview).
 

Interesting ideas. 🙂

Are you certain that pacifist is the best way to describe them?
Sporestalkers are described as very capable warriors, there are the bone blades, and the combat casting feat in the stats...
Aside from illusions and hallucinations, what do they do with / how do they get rid of intruders?
Who are the intruders?
Are there trading posts?
Does the spoken language have a name?
Glissandar is only mentioned in the caption of the first piece of art. Is this a city? (Who's city, and where?)

There is some repetitive text that could be consolidated, if you have time for another editorial pass.
 

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