damiller
Hero
As far as I can tell this is following the tropes pretty well of the cynical noir protagonist. I saw a good list of traits and one of those is that they "bumble" their way through solving the case. What it really is is that the noir protagonist can't get out of their own way. They are their own stumbling block. I see the writers doing that both with Hal and John. And I think they are doing it very well.







