Victim
First Post
He's finished as best I can tell, though surely I missed something...
Narbel Nogginsplitter, dwarf fighter
[Sblock=Racial & Class Abilities]
Racial
Cast-Iron Stomach: +5 racial bonus to saving throws against poison.
Dwarven Resilience: You can use your second wind as a minor action instead of a standard action.
Dwarven Weapon Proficiency: You gain proficiency with the throwing hammer and the warhammer.
Encumbered Speed: You move at your normal speed even when it would normally be reduced by armor or a heavy load. Other effects that limit speed (such as difficult terrain or magical effects) affect you normally.
Stand Your Ground: When an effect forces you to move—through a pull, a push, or a slide—you can move 1 square less than the effect specifies. This means an effect that normally pulls, pushes, or slides a target 1 square does not force you to move.
In addition, when an attack would knock you prone, you can make an immediate saving throw to avoid falling prone.
Class
COMBAT CHALLENGE
In combat, it’s dangerous to ignore a fighter. Every time you attack an enemy, whether the attack hits or misses, you can choose to mark that target. The mark lasts until the end of your next turn. While a target is marked, it takes a –2 penalty to attack rolls if its attack doesn’t include you as a target. A creature can be subject to only one mark at a time. A new mark supersedes a mark that was already in place.
In addition, whenever an enemy marked by you is adjacent to you and shifts or makes an attack that does not include you, you can make a melee basic attack against that enemy as an immediate interrupt.
COMBAT SUPERIORITY
You gain a bonus to opportunity attacks equal to your Wisdom modifier. An enemy struck by your opportunity attack stops moving, if a move provoked the attack. If it still has actions remaining, it can use them to resume moving.
FIGHTER WEAPON TALENT (Two-handed)
Choose either one-handed or two-handed weapons. When using a weapon of your chosen style, you gain a +1 bonus to attack rolls.
Armor Optimization (11th level): You have learned to make the most of the armor you wear, positioning it to better absorb and deflect blows. You gain a +1 bonus to AC whenever you wear any kind of armor.
Extra Damage Action (11th level): When you spend an action point to take an extra action, you also add one-half your level to the damage dealt by any of your standard action attacks this turn.[/sblock]
[sblock=Stats][/sblock]Code:STR 19 AC 27 CON 21 FORT 26 DEX 11 REF 19 INT 11 WILL 21 WIS 15 CHA 11 HP: 108 Init +6 Bloodied: 54 Speed 5 Surges/day: 16 Passive Surge Value: 32 -Insight 18 Action Points: -Perception 18 Resist: 5 cold, 5 fire (cloak of survival) [b]Skills[/b] 6 Acrobatics 6 0 0 0 6 Arcana 5 0 - 0 15 Athletics 10 5 0 0 6 Bluff 6 0 - 0 6 Diplomacy 6 0 - 0 10 Dungeoneering 8 0 - 2 18 Endurance 11 5 0 2 8 Heal 8 0 - 0 6 History 6 0 - 0 8 Insight 8 0 - 0 11 Intimidate 6 5 - 0 8 Nature 8 0 - 0 8 Perception 8 0 - 0 6 Religion 6 0 - 0 6 Stealth 6 0 0 0 6 Streetwise 6 0 - 0 6 Thievery 6 0 0 0 [b]Feats[/b] [b]Back to the Wall Paragon Tier Benefit:[/b] Whenever you are adjacent to a wall, you gain a +1 bonus to melee attack rolls, melee damage rolls, and AC. [b]Blood Thirst Paragon Tier Benefit:[/b] You gain a +2 bonus to melee damage rolls against bloodied foes. [b]Dwarven Durability [Dwarf] Paragon Tier Prerequisite:[/b] Dwarf [b]Benefit:[/b] Increase your number of healing surges by two and your healing surge value by your Constitution modifier. [b]Dwarven Weapon Training [Dwarf] Heroic Tier Prerequisite:[/b] Dwarf [b]Benefit:[/b] You gain proficiency and a +2 feat bonus to damage rolls with axes and hammers. [b]Wintertouched Heroic Tier Benefit:[/b] When attacking a creature that is vulnerable to cold, you gain combat advantage when you use a power that has the cold keyword. [b]Lasting Frost Paragon Tier Benefit:[/b] Any target you hit with a power that has the cold keyword gains vulnerable 5 cold until the end of your next turn. [B]Powerful Charge Heroic Tier PreRequisite:[/B] Str 13 [B]Benefit:[/B] When you charge, you gain a +2 bonus to damage and a +2 bonus to bull rush attempts. [B]Dodge Giants [Dwarf] Heroic Tier Prerequisite:[/B] Dwarf [B]Benefit:[/B] You gain a +1 bonus to AC and Reflex defense against the attacks of Large or larger foes.
[sblock=Powers]
At Will Exploits
Frost Greataxe +3
+16; 1d12+9 (+4 strength, +3 enhancement, +2 feat bonus)
Critical: +3d6 cold damage
Lightning Handaxe +2
+14; 1d6++8 (+4 strength, +2 enhancement, +2 feat bonus)
Critical: +2d6 lightning damage
Power (At-Will • Cold): Free Action. All damage dealth by this weapon is cold damage. Another free action returns the damage to normal.
Power (Daily • Cold): Free Action. Use this power when you hit with the weapon. The target takes 2d8 cold damage and is slowed until the end of your next turn.
Cleave; Fighter Attack 1
You hit one enemy, then cleave into another.
At-Will; Martial, Weapon
Standard Action; Melee weapon
Targets: One creature
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 1[W] + Strength modifier damage, and an enemy adjacent to you other than the
target takes damage equal to your Strength modifier.
Increase damage to 2[W] + Strength modifier at 21st level.
You punctuate your scything attacks with wicked jabs and small cutting blows that slip
through your enemy’s defenses.
At-Will; Martial, Weapon
Standard Action; Melee weapon
Target: One creature
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 1[W] + Strength modifier damage.
Increase damage to 2[W] + Strength modifier at 21st level.
Miss: Half Strength modifier damage. If you’re wielding a two-handed weapon, you
deal damage equal to your Strength modifier.
Encounter Exploits
You wind up and deliver a devastating blow with your weapon.
Encounter; Martial, Weapon
Standard Action; Melee weapon
Target: One creature
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 2[W] + Strength modifier damage
Weapon: If you’re wielding an axe, a hammer, or a mace, you gain a bonus to the
damage roll equal to your Constitution modifier.
Come and Get It; Fighter Attack 7
You call your opponents toward you and deliver a blow they will never forget.
Encounter; Martial, Weapon
Standard Action; Close burst 3;
Target: Each enemy in burst you can see
Effect: You pull each target 2 squares to a space adjacent to you. You cannot pull
a target that cannot end adjacent to you. You then make a close attack targeting each
adjacent enemy.
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 1[W] + Strength modifier damage.
You lay about with heavy, sweeping blows, hewing your enemies left and right.
Encounter; Martial, Weapon
Standard Action; Melee weapon
Primary Target: One creature
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 2[W] + Strength modifier damage. Make a secondary attack.
Weapon: If you’re wielding an axe, you gain a bonus to the damage roll equal to
your Constitution modifier.
Secondary Target: Each enemy adjacent to the primary target and within your melee
reach
Secondary Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 1[W] + Strength modifier damage.
Weapon: If you’re wielding an axe, you gain a bonus to the damage roll equal to your
Constitution modifier.
After landing a solid blow, you belt your enemy in the face with your fist.
Encounter; Martial, Weapon
Standard Action; Melee weapon
Target: One creature
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 2[W] + Strength modifier damage. Make a secondary attack against the same
target.
Secondary Attack: Strength + 2 vs. AC
Hit: 1d6 + Strength modifier damage, and the target is dazed until the end of your
next turn
Daily Exploits
You strike your enemy hard and hound him with skilled parries and stern reprisals.
Daily; Martial, Weapon
Standard Action; Melee weapon
Target: One creature
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 2[W] + Strength modifier damage, and you gain a +2 power bonus to attack rolls
and a +4 power bonus to damage rolls against the target until the end of the encounter.
Miss: Gain a +1 power bonus to attack rolls and a +2 power bonus to damage rolls
against the target until the end of the encounter.
You break through your enemy’s armor and deal a painful bleeding wound.
Daily; Martial, Reliable, Weapon
Standard Action; Melee weapon
Target: One creature
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 2[W] + Strength modifier damage, and the target takes ongoing 5 damage and a
–2 penalty to AC (save ends both).
You sting and hinder nearby foes with a savage flurry of strikes aimed at their
legs.
Daily; Martial, Reliable, Weapon
Standard Action; Close burst 1
Target: Each enemy in burst you can see
Attack: Strength vs. AC
Hit: 3[W] + Strength modifier damage, and the target is slowed (save
ends).
Utility Exploits
Boundless Endurance; Fighter Utility 2[/sblock]
You shake off the worst of your wounds.
Daily; Healing, Martial, Stance
Minor Action; Personal
Effect: You gain regeneration 2 + your Constitution modifier when you are bloodied.
Unbreakable; Fighter Utility 6
You steel yourself against a brutal attack.
Encounter; Martial
Immediate Reaction; Personal
Trigger: You are hit by an attack
Effect: Reduce the damage from the attack by 5 + your Constitution modifier.
Last Ditch Evasion; Fighter Utility 10
Thanks to a combination of skill and luck, you narrowly avoid an attack but leave
yourself perilously exposed.
Daily; Martial
Immediate Interrupt; Personal
Trigger: You are hit by an attack
Effect: You take no damage from the attack that just hit you. However, you are
stunned and take a –2 penalty to all defenses until the end of your next turn.
Deadly Payback; Pit Fighter Utility 12
You react viciously to an enemy that just hurt you.
Daily; Martial, Weapon
Immediate Reaction; Personal
Trigger: You take damage from a melee attack
Effect: Until the end of your next turn, you gain a +2 bonus to attack rolls and
damage rolls against the enemy that damaged you.
[sblock=Equipment]
Frost Greataxe +3 Level 13
Dwarven Scale armor +3 Level 12
Cloak of Survival +3 Level 14
Horned Helm Level 6 (1,800 gp) Charge attacks deal +1d6 damage.
Lightning handaxe +2 Level 10 (5,000 gp)
Potion of vitality x5 (5,000 gp)
Standard adventurer's kit (15 gp)
Everburning torch (50 gp)
Rope, silk 50 ft. (10 gp)
1125 gp[/sblock]
I didn't see anything wrong either. But you might want to A) write down the other powers of your items (Dwarven armor, Lightning Handaxe), and B) fill in the blanks on your powers (but it should be easy enough to modify your basic attack since it's all weapon powers, but you might want to do the work now instead of each round). Looks good though.
