Character Building

T

Tinwe

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #91

Well, I finished up my Dwarf Swordmage build and sent it off to the judges for approval: http://www.enworld.org/wiki/index.php/LEBC:Gruff_One-Eye_(Tinwe)

Anyone with some spare time mind taking a look and seeing if there's anything glaringly wrong in the background? I don't have the 4e Eberron player's guide, so I'm running on memory from 3.5.

 

Last edited: Aug 21, 2009

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hornedturtle

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #92

well first that link doesn't go to the right page. other than that i can't see anything but i missed a lot on my own.

 

Velmont

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #93

Copy/paste the URL. The link miss the last ), that's why it doesn't work. You need to add the ) to the link or simply copy the whole URL and paste it in your address bar.

 

renau1g

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #94

I've looked over Gruff Tinwe, a couple things to change, but not too much. Should be approved by me today if you get it updated.

 

T

Tinwe

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #95

renau1g said:

I've looked over Gruff Tinwe, a couple things to change, but not too much. Should be approved by me today if you get it updated.

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Updated. I posted my replies to each of your comments, but the gist is
1) no way for me to set gender- the tag doesn't appear in the edit pane
2) ac is correct, but includes Swordmage Warding on the assumption that Gruff always has a blade in hand. I'll take it out.
3) no way to set languages in the summary- tag doesn't appear in edit pane

 

stonegod

Spawn of Khyber/LEB Judge

• Aug 21, 2009

• #96

Tinwe said:

Updated. I posted my replies to each of your comments, but the gist is
1) no way for me to set gender- the tag doesn't appear in the edit pane
2) ac is correct, but includes Swordmage Warding on the assumption that Gruff always has a blade in hand. I'll take it out.
3) no way to set languages in the summary- tag doesn't appear in edit pane

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The Gender tag is there, and it says male, so someone did it.

Language tag defaults to Common if no entry is added; I added one for you.

In general (for everyone), make sure to read the documentation on the sample character and the template: The template provides a list of all the tags. I'll make this more clear on the sample character and creation pages.

 

renau1g

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #97

Tinwe said:

Updated. I posted my replies to each of your comments, but the gist is
1) no way for me to set gender- the tag doesn't appear in the edit pane
2) ac is correct, but includes Swordmage Warding on the assumption that Gruff always has a blade in hand. I'll take it out.
3) no way to set languages in the summary- tag doesn't appear in edit pane

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Sent you a PM, I've corrected the gender. the tag was missing, I pulled it from another wiki sheet.

 

T

Tinwe

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #98

I changed Armor Prof: Chain to AP:Hide, and adjusted all the related fields (defense, weight, equipment, treasure, summary)

 

renau1g

First Post

• Aug 21, 2009

• #99

Excellent. Approved. That's a pretty nice AC, my lvl 5 SM in RL only has 22...

 

hornedturtle

First Post

• Jun 28, 2010

• #100

So to revive an old thread, How strict are we with the backgrounds? Experimental Prototype seems to fit 354b's background story best but I would like the +2 bonus to be to History rather than Athletics or Endurance.