Feylight and Dragonbreath

arcanaman

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Feylight and Dragonbreath is a 4E setting I am thinking about critique

please. I am going to start with the state of the world

State of the World

Tension rise as the Empires of Nayavar(Elven) and Ashkoria(Dragonborn)

as they once again spread there influence into the plains of Imolien(human and halfling)

there neighbors across the plains Morthan(Dwarven) and Bael Turath

(Teifling) will inevdibly be drawn into the conflict Bael Turath out of fear of

the Eladrins who rule Nayavar and greed which Ashkoria is willing to sate.

Dardardin out of loyalty and expansion intrest as there mountain home

become more Crowded.
Political Bodies

Council of Stars(Eladrin/Elven): The Elves long ago made a pact with the

stars this pact turned some of the elves into Eladrin making a covenant

with the stars never to use there powers aganist there race. to keep the

covenant the Eladrin elected a Council the Council then votes from

among themseleves to Elect two Consuls one reigning in Spring and Summer and the other in Fall and Winter every so often there is a

transient season this is the the time when both Consuls rule together.

During the rule of one Consul the other goes to the Feywild to report to

the Superior Eladrins who help prepare the Consul for there rule in the next season.

Apprentinces of the Stars(Eladrin/Elven): This organzation was begun by

the current Consul Elisandre (Spring/Summer) she herself drawing power

from the stars to gain Eldricth power she has gather a group of Eladrin and

Elves to teach them these powers and is the only inter racial group

besides the army in Nayavar.

Priest of Karis(Dragon Born): Plague and natural disasters ended the

second incarnation of Ashkoria Civil war broke out between it's regional

districts and suffering came and with it the Great Red Wyrm Karis

gathering Dragonborn by claiming at first that he was servant of bauhmant

and later that he was a deity Karis was able to reforge Ashkoria and place

himself as god. making anyone who served him faithfully his priest which

are know the most potent political body in Ashkoria.

Claws of Justice(Dragon Born): The military wing of Karis Faith those

warriors whom show Faith in Karis and are Shown how to draw power

from it. they are the most recigonizible symbol of Ashkoria Today.

Black Circle(Teifling): The Emperor of Bael Turath placed a Council of


infernal Barons, Duchesses and other nobles underneath him to distract

them from trying to take his thrown but the Council does have real power

although they seldom agree upon anything so they can't use it.
 
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magnusmalkus

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Drama! I love it! Good work.

Feylight and Dragonbreath is a 4E setting I am thinking about critique

please. I am going to start with the state of the world

State of the World

Tension rise as the Empires of Nayavar(Elven) and Ashkoria(Dragonborn)

as they once again spread there influence into the plains of Imolien(human and halfling)

there neighbors across the plains Morthan(Dwarven) and Bael Turath

(Teifling) will inevdibly be drawn into the conflict Bael Turath out of fear of

the Eladrins who rule Nayavar and greed which Ashkoria is willing to sate.

Morthan out of loyalty and expansion intrest as there mountain home

become more Crowded.
Political Bodies

Council of Stars(Eladrin/Elven): The Elves long ago made a pact with the

stars this pact turned some of the elves into Eladrin making a covenant

with the stars never to use there powers aganist there race. to keep the

covenant the Eladrin elected a Council the Council then votes from

among themseleves to Elect two Consuls one reigning in Spring and Summer and the other in Fall and Winter every so often there is a

transient season this is the the time when both Consuls rule together.

During the rule of one Consul the other goes to the Feywild to report to

the Superior Eladrins who help prepare the Consul for there rule in the next season.

Apprentinces of the Stars(Eladrin/Elven): This organzation was begun by

the current Consul Elisandre (Spring/Summer) she herself drawing power

from the stars to gain Eldricth power she has gather a group of Eladrin and

Elves to teach them these powers and is the only inter racial group

besides the army in Nayavar.

Priest of Karis(Dragon Born): Plague and natural disasters ended the

second incarnation of Ashkoria Civil war broke out between it's regional

districts and suffering came and with it the Great Red Wyrm Karis

gathering Dragonborn by claiming at first that he was servant of bauhmant

and later that he was a deity Karis was able to reforge Ashkoria and place

himself as god. making anyone who served him faithfully his priest which

are know the most potent political body in Ashkoria.

Claws of Justice(Dragon Born): The military wing of Karis Faith those

warriors whom show Faith in Karis and are Shown how to draw power

from it. they are the most recigonizible symbol of Ashkoria Today.

Black Circle(Teifling): The Emperor of Bael Turath placed a Council of


infernal Barons, Duchesses and other nobles underneath him to distract

them from trying to take his thrown but the Council does have real power

although they seldom agree upon anything so they can't use it.
 



hater of shame

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sound very cool, and sounds like a lot of work too... If i could givbe you some advice it would be: Start small, say one particular region and start a campaign there. I have found that it is easier to have the players travel around and build the world around them as they come to a new country/region/continent than dump them into a half-finished world. Then they too are involved with the creation of your world and the sub-plots.. But just advice u know
 

arcanaman

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you have vocalize what has happen in my 3E oriental settingfor this I've already

mapped everything out using gods from the PHB I don't know what will hapeen next
 

arcanaman

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Stone Lords(Dwarven): The stone lords are retired generals who are in

charge of one of the stone keeps vital to the nations defense they help

the king in matters of war and defense.

Races

Eladrins: The rulers and Nobles of Nayavar the Eladrins have an older

brother mentalitly when comes to the elves treating them like little

children the only politic groups open to elves are the army and the

apprentices of the stars while Eladrins do everything there younger

sibilings are too young to do or achevie.

Elves: The general populace of Nayavar the Elves greatly out number there rulers all thought there leaders have more magical aptidue then there leaders.
Dwarves: Dwarves rule the Empire of Darbardin a land of Mountains, Moutain valleys and rocky hills
 
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