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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 8642086" data-attributes="member: 57383"><p><img src="https://www.enworld.org/attachments/deva1-jpg.248749/" alt="" class="fr-fic fr-dii fr-draggable " style="" /></p><p></p><p>The Divining Tongue doesn't have "and cannot be used again until the devadragonet stops sensing the overwhelming presence for 1 to 3 minutes (4d6 + 6 rounds)" in the current <strong><a href="https://enworld.org/index.php?posts/8540033" target="_blank">Enworld Devadragonet</a></strong> but uses a combination of that and the old wording of "and cannot be used again until the presence has moved out of sense range and the devadragonet has a short rest".</p><p></p><p>Come to think of it, that paragraph should also have "chili, <span style="color: red"><strong>or</strong></span> the spray" at the end instead of just "chili, the spray of a skunk."</p><p></p><p>Will correct that.</p><p></p><p>The paragraph formatting in <strong><em>Heavenscent Breath</em></strong> is messed up, but I appreciate that D&D Beyond isn't cooperating with you there!</p><p></p><p><img src="https://www.enworld.org/attachments/deva2-jpg.248750/" alt="" class="fr-fic fr-dii fr-draggable " style="" /></p><p>Added the flavour text "Variant" text to the <strong>Description</strong>, but I don't care for the title of Variant: Celestial Familiar. For a start, the <em>Monster Manual</em> subentry title text uses S<span style="font-size: 12px">MALL</span> C<span style="font-size: 12px">APS</span> and is <strong>Bold</strong> rather than <strong><em>Bold Italic</em></strong>. That formatting helps it stand out from the rest of the test.</p><p></p><p>Also, if we follow the lead of the Quasit and Imp it should have the creature's name in the title (i.e. "Devadragon Familiar" rather than "Celestial Familiar" and have an introductory paragraph.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Let's see what I can persuade Enworld to do…</p><p></p><p><span style="font-size: 18px"><strong>Variant: Devadragonet Familiar</strong></span></p><p>The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar…</p><p></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18px">V</span>ARIANT<span style="font-size: 18px">: D</span>EVADRAGONET <span style="font-size: 18px">F</span>AMILIAR</strong></p><p>The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar…</p><p></p><p><strong>VARIANT: DEVADRAGONET FAMILIAR</strong></p><p>The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar…</p><p></p><p>How about…</p><p></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18px">V</span>ARIANT<span style="font-size: 18px">: D</span>EVADRAGONET <span style="font-size: 18px">F</span>AMILIAR</strong></p><p>Devadragonets sometimes serve mortal spellcasters as helpers, advisors, and familiars. The devadragonet is a self-effacing and diligent servant, but constantly encourages its master to acts of mercy and charity and warning against evil behavior. Should the mortal do anything immoral the baby bahamut pleads with them to rectify the sinful act and mend their ways, no matter how minor the peccadillo. Such devadragonets have the following trait.</p><p> <em><strong>Familiar.</strong></em> The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar, forming a telepathic bond with its willing master. While the two are bonded, the master can sense what the devadragon senses as long as they are within 1 mile of each other. While the devadragonet is within 10 feet of its master, the master shares the devadragon’s Magic Resistance trait. If its master violates the terms of the contract, the devadragon can end its service as a familiar, ending the telepathic bond.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 8642086, member: 57383"] [IMG]https://www.enworld.org/attachments/deva1-jpg.248749/[/IMG] The Divining Tongue doesn't have "and cannot be used again until the devadragonet stops sensing the overwhelming presence for 1 to 3 minutes (4d6 + 6 rounds)" in the current [B][URL='https://enworld.org/index.php?posts/8540033']Enworld Devadragonet[/URL][/B] but uses a combination of that and the old wording of "and cannot be used again until the presence has moved out of sense range and the devadragonet has a short rest". Come to think of it, that paragraph should also have "chili, [COLOR=red][B]or[/B][/COLOR] the spray" at the end instead of just "chili, the spray of a skunk." Will correct that. The paragraph formatting in [B][I]Heavenscent Breath[/I][/B] is messed up, but I appreciate that D&D Beyond isn't cooperating with you there! [IMG]https://www.enworld.org/attachments/deva2-jpg.248750/[/IMG] Added the flavour text "Variant" text to the [B]Description[/B], but I don't care for the title of Variant: Celestial Familiar. For a start, the [I]Monster Manual[/I] subentry title text uses S[SIZE=3]MALL[/SIZE] C[SIZE=3]APS[/SIZE] and is [B]Bold[/B] rather than [B][I]Bold Italic[/I][/B]. That formatting helps it stand out from the rest of the test. Also, if we follow the lead of the Quasit and Imp it should have the creature's name in the title (i.e. "Devadragon Familiar" rather than "Celestial Familiar" and have an introductory paragraph. Let's see what I can persuade Enworld to do… [SIZE=5][B]Variant: Devadragonet Familiar[/B][/SIZE] The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar… [B][SIZE=5]V[/SIZE]ARIANT[SIZE=5]: D[/SIZE]EVADRAGONET [SIZE=5]F[/SIZE]AMILIAR[/B] The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar… [B]VARIANT: DEVADRAGONET FAMILIAR[/B] The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar… How about… [B][SIZE=5]V[/SIZE]ARIANT[SIZE=5]: D[/SIZE]EVADRAGONET [SIZE=5]F[/SIZE]AMILIAR[/B] Devadragonets sometimes serve mortal spellcasters as helpers, advisors, and familiars. The devadragonet is a self-effacing and diligent servant, but constantly encourages its master to acts of mercy and charity and warning against evil behavior. Should the mortal do anything immoral the baby bahamut pleads with them to rectify the sinful act and mend their ways, no matter how minor the peccadillo. Such devadragonets have the following trait. [I][B]Familiar.[/B][/I] The devadragonet can enter into a contract to serve another creature as a familiar, forming a telepathic bond with its willing master. While the two are bonded, the master can sense what the devadragon senses as long as they are within 1 mile of each other. While the devadragonet is within 10 feet of its master, the master shares the devadragon’s Magic Resistance trait. If its master violates the terms of the contract, the devadragon can end its service as a familiar, ending the telepathic bond. [/QUOTE]
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