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<blockquote data-quote="Dark Eternal" data-source="post: 847224" data-attributes="member: 7932"><p>Whew. Well, that was fun. Looking back, I find one particular oversight and I curse my spellcheck software for its obssesion for correcting passive voice. I failed to note that one sentence has been rearranged and now makes no sense. The first sentence of the second paragraph in the body of the story reads, "A well-armed force of bandits, robbed and wounded, and left for dead had waylaid him." That should be, "A well-armed force of bandits had waylaid him, and robbed, wounded and left him for dead."</p><p></p><p>I don't expect that the error will be overlooked by the judges; I just had to post the correction before I could comfortably go to bed. Otherwise, I wouldn't have felt like it was actually <em>done</em>, ya know? <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p><p></p><p>Been looking at the other submissions so far, and I have to say I'm quite impressed by all of them. I don't envy you judges, having to choose between them. Good job, everyone!</p><p></p><p>Win or lose, it's been a pleasure to be a part of this project. I hope that you all find my submission as enjoyable as I have found the others! (Arwink, I'm particularly impressed with your story. Very bold, and exceptionally well written. I won't be disappointed at all if your entry is chosen over mine - it's great!)</p><p></p><p>Thanks, and thanks.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Dark Eternal, post: 847224, member: 7932"] Whew. Well, that was fun. Looking back, I find one particular oversight and I curse my spellcheck software for its obssesion for correcting passive voice. I failed to note that one sentence has been rearranged and now makes no sense. The first sentence of the second paragraph in the body of the story reads, "A well-armed force of bandits, robbed and wounded, and left for dead had waylaid him." That should be, "A well-armed force of bandits had waylaid him, and robbed, wounded and left him for dead." I don't expect that the error will be overlooked by the judges; I just had to post the correction before I could comfortably go to bed. Otherwise, I wouldn't have felt like it was actually [i]done[/i], ya know? :D Been looking at the other submissions so far, and I have to say I'm quite impressed by all of them. I don't envy you judges, having to choose between them. Good job, everyone! Win or lose, it's been a pleasure to be a part of this project. I hope that you all find my submission as enjoyable as I have found the others! (Arwink, I'm particularly impressed with your story. Very bold, and exceptionally well written. I won't be disappointed at all if your entry is chosen over mine - it's great!) Thanks, and thanks. [/QUOTE]
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