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<blockquote data-quote="Piratecat" data-source="post: 1849222" data-attributes="member: 2"><p>Thanks, Rodrigo. I first tried to write it from the emotionally abusive husband's point of view, and it didn't work for me. Once I decided to go the route of "wife descending into madness," the story fell right in place. I'm not tremendously thrilled with the photo usage for the bronze statue, but what the hell... I like the feather-boa-as-millipede enough to balance the two out.</p><p></p><p>Let's hear it for indents and formatting; flashbacks in a short story are a pain in the ass to do. I'm glad you thought the "italicized interspersed thoughts" technique wasn't distracting.</p><p></p><p>Even if I don't win this round, I'm glad I wrote the story. It was a useful stretch for me. I'm hoping it has the right ring of psychological creepiness to turn the trick, but that's by no means a sure thing. Steel Draco has a strong contender in his own right, and no telling which the judges will prefer.</p><p></p><p>Speaking of which, S_D? Nice job, man. I like.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Piratecat, post: 1849222, member: 2"] Thanks, Rodrigo. I first tried to write it from the emotionally abusive husband's point of view, and it didn't work for me. Once I decided to go the route of "wife descending into madness," the story fell right in place. I'm not tremendously thrilled with the photo usage for the bronze statue, but what the hell... I like the feather-boa-as-millipede enough to balance the two out. Let's hear it for indents and formatting; flashbacks in a short story are a pain in the ass to do. I'm glad you thought the "italicized interspersed thoughts" technique wasn't distracting. Even if I don't win this round, I'm glad I wrote the story. It was a useful stretch for me. I'm hoping it has the right ring of psychological creepiness to turn the trick, but that's by no means a sure thing. Steel Draco has a strong contender in his own right, and no telling which the judges will prefer. Speaking of which, S_D? Nice job, man. I like. [/QUOTE]
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