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<blockquote data-quote="orchid blossom" data-source="post: 1679315" data-attributes="member: 12815"><p>I'm very honestly surprised to be moving on. I felt Greywolf had some great ideas going on, and creativity is where I feel I'm going to get beat if it's going to happen.</p><p></p><p>I can say now that I rewrote at least one-third to half the story in the last four hours before it was due. I had worked in the spider/bear and the gnomemansland pictures in a different way, bringing in a fiancee for Carowyn. It stunk on ice, so it got trashed. Some of the omissions, like not mentioning soon enough in the story that Carowyn and Erica are gnomes, were victims of the rewrite. A few things had to be changed, and I forgot to work it back in.</p><p></p><p>Also, I originally had a completely different idea. I wanted to write a very "meta" story. It would have starred Piratecat and Clay as over the top villians. Piratecat as a kind of Enworld mob boss, and Clay as "the mad potter" moving in on his territory.</p><p></p><p>Piratecat would have sent a hired gun to find out what happened to his team of stealth gnomes he'd sent to plant the ants in Clay's air conditioner. Clay would have been creating weird animals from clay and then magically bringing them to life, etc.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>To answer these questions.... In my mind, the globes attached the car were enough to take out the few soldiers who should have been at the waypoint. Carowyn needed to throw from the back because there were considerably more people to be knocked out than orginally intended. Another vicitm of the rewrite, it wasn't made clear.</p><p></p><p>The "this time" line I can't explain except perhaps from cranberry juice psychosis? (I was home sick that day and pushing fluids.) Probably an editing miss.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="orchid blossom, post: 1679315, member: 12815"] I'm very honestly surprised to be moving on. I felt Greywolf had some great ideas going on, and creativity is where I feel I'm going to get beat if it's going to happen. I can say now that I rewrote at least one-third to half the story in the last four hours before it was due. I had worked in the spider/bear and the gnomemansland pictures in a different way, bringing in a fiancee for Carowyn. It stunk on ice, so it got trashed. Some of the omissions, like not mentioning soon enough in the story that Carowyn and Erica are gnomes, were victims of the rewrite. A few things had to be changed, and I forgot to work it back in. Also, I originally had a completely different idea. I wanted to write a very "meta" story. It would have starred Piratecat and Clay as over the top villians. Piratecat as a kind of Enworld mob boss, and Clay as "the mad potter" moving in on his territory. Piratecat would have sent a hired gun to find out what happened to his team of stealth gnomes he'd sent to plant the ants in Clay's air conditioner. Clay would have been creating weird animals from clay and then magically bringing them to life, etc. To answer these questions.... In my mind, the globes attached the car were enough to take out the few soldiers who should have been at the waypoint. Carowyn needed to throw from the back because there were considerably more people to be knocked out than orginally intended. Another vicitm of the rewrite, it wasn't made clear. The "this time" line I can't explain except perhaps from cranberry juice psychosis? (I was home sick that day and pushing fluids.) Probably an editing miss. [/QUOTE]
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