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<blockquote data-quote="jkason" data-source="post: 5949623" data-attributes="member: 2710"><p>Reviewing <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Anaerion_(jackslate45)" target="_blank">Anaerion</a>:</p><p></p><p>1) The current location link was to an old game. - fixed</p><p></p><p>2) Headband bump wasn't included in Abilities section. -added</p><p></p><p>3) Ability mod on Intimidate was wrong. - fixed</p><p></p><p>4) I changed the notation on Know (Local). The way it read to me made me think the headband was part of the Misc bonus, so at first I thought you'd overspent ranks. I marked the ranks explicitly as coming from the headband, then.</p><p></p><p>5) I don't see where Anaerion acquired Create Pit. It doesn't seem to be listed in the level ups or the learning section.</p><p></p><p>6) Anaerion's nowhere near it at the moment, of course, but since a Handy Haversack does have an upper weight limit, it might behoove you to still list the weight of individual items within it. </p><p></p><p>7) You had the costs for waterskin and inkpen inverted. - fixed</p><p></p><p>8) My math has Anaerion with 391.55 in coins (without the Kostry Kopec awards). 80 gp off mid-adventure doesn't concern me too much, though, but I thought I'd point it out now in case you want to double check.</p><p></p><p></p><p>The extra spell in his book is important enough that I'm going to hold on approval, so <span style="color: yellow"><strong>NOT YET</strong></span></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="jkason, post: 5949623, member: 2710"] Reviewing [url=http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Anaerion_(jackslate45)]Anaerion[/url]: 1) The current location link was to an old game. - fixed 2) Headband bump wasn't included in Abilities section. -added 3) Ability mod on Intimidate was wrong. - fixed 4) I changed the notation on Know (Local). The way it read to me made me think the headband was part of the Misc bonus, so at first I thought you'd overspent ranks. I marked the ranks explicitly as coming from the headband, then. 5) I don't see where Anaerion acquired Create Pit. It doesn't seem to be listed in the level ups or the learning section. 6) Anaerion's nowhere near it at the moment, of course, but since a Handy Haversack does have an upper weight limit, it might behoove you to still list the weight of individual items within it. 7) You had the costs for waterskin and inkpen inverted. - fixed 8) My math has Anaerion with 391.55 in coins (without the Kostry Kopec awards). 80 gp off mid-adventure doesn't concern me too much, though, but I thought I'd point it out now in case you want to double check. The extra spell in his book is important enough that I'm going to hold on approval, so [color=yellow][b]NOT YET[/B][/COLOR] [/QUOTE]
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