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<blockquote data-quote="Satin Knights" data-source="post: 6037493" data-attributes="member: 6666968"><p>Reviewing Parinon:</p><p>a) I went through and tweaked a lot of little formatting things for clarity and to remove scroll bars. Occasionally I also removed the leading zeros. You can strip the rest of them if you desire.</p><p>b) I turned off the Table of Contents with __NOTOC__ at the top. To me, it just gets in the way. You can turn it back on if desired by simply removing that marker at the top of the page.</p><p>c) You had two combat traits. You are only allowed one from each section (the combat part). I swapped in Capable(Reflex) in for Deft Dodger in order to switch one to the General category and make it legal with the same effect.</p><p>d) I removed the spells section since a fighter doesn't usually cast. If you pick up a casting class later, it is easy to add that section back.</p><p>e) We don't count the weight of your first set of clothes. That saves you 8 lbs.</p><p></p><p></p><p>A good stable, solid character. </p><p>Suggestions: </p><p>1) You haven't chosen any archetypes. A fighter gets many good ones to choose from. They also need to be declared at first level. So, now is the time to declare an archetype if you are going to use one.</p><p></p><p>2) You don't have a dagger. Skinning a deer or simply slicing up dinner is a bit difficult with a long sword. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick out tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /> Now that we are not counting the shirt on your back as weight, you can pick up a dagger and still be inside your light weight limit.</p><p></p><p>Parinon has his first <strong><span style="color: Lime">APPROVAL</span></strong> of two. Any player can do the second review at first level. Parinon can also enter the <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/talking-talk/279251-living-pathfinder-tavern-thread-dunn-wright-inn-new-post.html" target="_blank">Dunn Wright Inn</a> and start socializing.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Satin Knights, post: 6037493, member: 6666968"] Reviewing Parinon: a) I went through and tweaked a lot of little formatting things for clarity and to remove scroll bars. Occasionally I also removed the leading zeros. You can strip the rest of them if you desire. b) I turned off the Table of Contents with __NOTOC__ at the top. To me, it just gets in the way. You can turn it back on if desired by simply removing that marker at the top of the page. c) You had two combat traits. You are only allowed one from each section (the combat part). I swapped in Capable(Reflex) in for Deft Dodger in order to switch one to the General category and make it legal with the same effect. d) I removed the spells section since a fighter doesn't usually cast. If you pick up a casting class later, it is easy to add that section back. e) We don't count the weight of your first set of clothes. That saves you 8 lbs. A good stable, solid character. Suggestions: 1) You haven't chosen any archetypes. A fighter gets many good ones to choose from. They also need to be declared at first level. So, now is the time to declare an archetype if you are going to use one. 2) You don't have a dagger. Skinning a deer or simply slicing up dinner is a bit difficult with a long sword. :p Now that we are not counting the shirt on your back as weight, you can pick up a dagger and still be inside your light weight limit. Parinon has his first [B][COLOR=Lime]APPROVAL[/COLOR][/B] of two. Any player can do the second review at first level. Parinon can also enter the [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/talking-talk/279251-living-pathfinder-tavern-thread-dunn-wright-inn-new-post.html"]Dunn Wright Inn[/URL] and start socializing. [/QUOTE]
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