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<blockquote data-quote="Aura" data-source="post: 6174555" data-attributes="member: 6747658"><p><u>Review of Pirvinia von Lichenstein</u></p><p></p><p>Mechanics:</p><p>1) You seem to be missing one regional language.</p><p>2) The bonuses (or penalties) of your stats seem to be off. The ones that need correcting:</p><p>STR -2</p><p>INT +1</p><p>WIS +1</p><p>CHA +4</p><p>3) The stat bonuses used in Spellcraft seems off. Should be +1.</p><p>4) Skill Bonus Books: I can't find where these come from, but they follow the base logic of 50gp for +2 to one skill.</p><p></p><p>Note: As a non-judge, I'm a little leery of editing another person's character sheet except to add things like approval and such.</p><p></p><p>Comments:</p><p>1) Initiative +8 = froggy caster.</p><p>2) Should Resistance be included in the base save? That would imply using it an awful lot. (I know it's properly noted.)</p><p>3) Might want to note that Jolt includes PB range. Next level there will be the possibility of being without the +1 hit/damage as range extends to 35'.</p><p>4) Weight: She's pretty light, a little below the low end for small frame on most height/weight charts I find.</p><p>5) 3rd paragraph under picture of Liv: "scream at him to bud out"? Was bud out intentional?</p><p></p><p>Overall, looks good. Just needs the mechanical fixes (or clarifications where I made mistakes in assessment) for non-judge approval, so <em><span style="color: #ffff00">NOT YET.</span></em></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Aura, post: 6174555, member: 6747658"] [U]Review of Pirvinia von Lichenstein[/U] Mechanics: 1) You seem to be missing one regional language. 2) The bonuses (or penalties) of your stats seem to be off. The ones that need correcting: STR -2 INT +1 WIS +1 CHA +4 3) The stat bonuses used in Spellcraft seems off. Should be +1. 4) Skill Bonus Books: I can't find where these come from, but they follow the base logic of 50gp for +2 to one skill. Note: As a non-judge, I'm a little leery of editing another person's character sheet except to add things like approval and such. Comments: 1) Initiative +8 = froggy caster. 2) Should Resistance be included in the base save? That would imply using it an awful lot. (I know it's properly noted.) 3) Might want to note that Jolt includes PB range. Next level there will be the possibility of being without the +1 hit/damage as range extends to 35'. 4) Weight: She's pretty light, a little below the low end for small frame on most height/weight charts I find. 5) 3rd paragraph under picture of Liv: "scream at him to bud out"? Was bud out intentional? Overall, looks good. Just needs the mechanical fixes (or clarifications where I made mistakes in assessment) for non-judge approval, so [I][COLOR=#ffff00]NOT YET.[/COLOR][/I] [/QUOTE]
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