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<blockquote data-quote="Gnarl45" data-source="post: 6841557" data-attributes="member: 6787695"><p>It looks better than most DM's Guild products and the writing is fairly pleasant to read.</p><p></p><p>I think the problem is the topic and that it's a paid product. The topic is kind of cliché and the only people that will buy it are Twilight fans with very high expectations. With a paid product, you're also telling people you want to be treated like a professional.</p><p></p><p>There are different categories of professional products but they all have two things in common: proper English and clean layouts. You write very well but even the best writers need a copyeditor. These guys do an excellent job a smoothing your writing and making it easier to read. It might sound like a waste of money but writing proper English takes time...</p><p></p><p>The layout is nice but it needs a little cleaning up to make it look professional. You can also use simpler layouts. I agree with Aaron on the background. One background please! I'm not sure about the illustrations though. It seems to be more a problem of mismatching colors that you can easily fix with a Photo Filter adjustment layer in Photoshop. I can walk you through the steps if you want.</p><p></p><p>Speaking of your layout. Did you make it from scratch? I'd like to make DMG stuff that looks like WoTC products and I'd rather use an existing template than make my own.</p><p></p><p>Overall, I think you're doing a great job. You also wrote the epic book right?</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Gnarl45, post: 6841557, member: 6787695"] It looks better than most DM's Guild products and the writing is fairly pleasant to read. I think the problem is the topic and that it's a paid product. The topic is kind of cliché and the only people that will buy it are Twilight fans with very high expectations. With a paid product, you're also telling people you want to be treated like a professional. There are different categories of professional products but they all have two things in common: proper English and clean layouts. You write very well but even the best writers need a copyeditor. These guys do an excellent job a smoothing your writing and making it easier to read. It might sound like a waste of money but writing proper English takes time... The layout is nice but it needs a little cleaning up to make it look professional. You can also use simpler layouts. I agree with Aaron on the background. One background please! I'm not sure about the illustrations though. It seems to be more a problem of mismatching colors that you can easily fix with a Photo Filter adjustment layer in Photoshop. I can walk you through the steps if you want. Speaking of your layout. Did you make it from scratch? I'd like to make DMG stuff that looks like WoTC products and I'd rather use an existing template than make my own. Overall, I think you're doing a great job. You also wrote the epic book right? [/QUOTE]
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