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<blockquote data-quote="Ath-kethin" data-source="post: 7448048" data-attributes="member: 6798775"><p>Nice work; I particularly like Mystic as a background, though I could see a case being made for the Favored Soul. </p><p></p><p>A few suggestions:</p><p></p><p>On Page 4 (of the PDF) in your Languages sidebar, you refer readers to an out of print 3.5e sourcebook. Since it is unlikely that everyone has access to this book, I would remove the reference.</p><p></p><p>On page 6 (of the PDF) I'd take another look at your wording for the kender's Taunt ability. I feel it could be clearer.</p><p style="margin-left: 20px"> - I actually really love your take on kender overall. The Pitiable trait for afflicted kender is just so sad. Well done! You may, however, want to spend a bit of text explaining the difference between True and Afflicted kender, for readers who are not as familiar with the setting and its lore. </p><p></p><p>In several places: 5e graphic standards have spell names as lowercase and italicized. In your document, spell names are capitalized and not italic.</p><p></p><p>On page 9 (of the PDF) under dragonarmies, it would be more helpful to list them as "formally dissolved in AC XXX" instaed of just "actually dissolved."</p><p></p><p>Again, nice work.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ath-kethin, post: 7448048, member: 6798775"] Nice work; I particularly like Mystic as a background, though I could see a case being made for the Favored Soul. A few suggestions: On Page 4 (of the PDF) in your Languages sidebar, you refer readers to an out of print 3.5e sourcebook. Since it is unlikely that everyone has access to this book, I would remove the reference. On page 6 (of the PDF) I'd take another look at your wording for the kender's Taunt ability. I feel it could be clearer. [INDENT] - I actually really love your take on kender overall. The Pitiable trait for afflicted kender is just so sad. Well done! You may, however, want to spend a bit of text explaining the difference between True and Afflicted kender, for readers who are not as familiar with the setting and its lore. [/INDENT] In several places: 5e graphic standards have spell names as lowercase and italicized. In your document, spell names are capitalized and not italic. On page 9 (of the PDF) under dragonarmies, it would be more helpful to list them as "formally dissolved in AC XXX" instaed of just "actually dissolved." Again, nice work. [/QUOTE]
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