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<blockquote data-quote="Sporemine" data-source="post: 4877520" data-attributes="member: 80911"><p>Thanks for the help mesh. The site is still slow and I have spotty access to the internets.</p><p> </p><p>There are a couple things I would like feedback on:</p><p></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18px">Mageripper Swarm</span></strong></p><p><strong>Level 6 Controller</strong></p><p><strong>Medium Aberrant Beast</strong></p><p><strong>XP</strong> 250</p><p><strong>Initiative</strong> +6</p><p><strong>Senses</strong> Perception +11</p><p> </p><p><strong>Swarm of Fangs</strong> aura 1;</p><p>The Mageripper swarm can make a bite attack as a free action against any creature in the aura.</p><p> </p><p><strong>HP</strong> 72; <strong>Bloodied</strong> 36</p><p><strong>AC</strong> 20; <strong>Fortitude</strong> 18, <strong>Reflex</strong> 18, <strong>Will</strong> 18</p><p><strong>Immune</strong> Gaze, Illusions; <strong>Resist</strong> Half damage from melee and ranged attacks; </p><p><strong>Vulnerable</strong> 5 close and area attacks</p><p><strong>Speed</strong> 6, climb 4</p><p> </p><p><img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/bm.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":bmelee:" title="Basic Melee :bmelee:" data-shortname=":bmelee:" /> <strong>Bite</strong> (Standard; at-will)</p><p>+11 Vs. AC, 1d10+4 damage</p><p> </p><p><strong>Anti-Magic Shield</strong> (Immediate Reaction (when hit with a magic attack); 1 per round)</p><p>The attack is changed to a miss</p><p> </p><p><strong>Magic Leech</strong></p><p>When missed with a magic attack, the target loses the use of that attack until the end of the encounter.</p><p> </p><p><strong>Alignment</strong> Unaligned</p><p><strong>Languages</strong> None</p><p><strong>Skills</strong> Athletics +11, Nature +11, Stealth +11</p><p><strong>Str</strong> 16 (+6) <strong>Dex</strong> 16 (+6) <strong>Wis</strong> 16 (+6) <strong>Con</strong> 16 (+6) <strong>Int</strong> 16 (+6) <strong>Cha</strong> 16 (+6)</p><p><strong>Equipment</strong> None</p><p> </p><p> </p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18px">Necrosis Carnex</span></strong></p><p><strong>Level 3 Skirmisher (Leader)</strong></p><p><strong>Medium Natural Animate (undead)</strong></p><p><strong>XP</strong> 150</p><p><strong>Initiative</strong> +5</p><p><strong>Senses</strong> Perception +8</p><p> </p><p><strong>Malign Aura (Necrotic, Fear)</strong> aura 3; All living creatures within 3 squares of the Necrosis Carnex take a -1 to all defenses. </p><p> </p><p><strong>HP</strong> 46; <strong>Bloodied</strong> 23</p><p><strong>AC</strong> 17; <strong>Fortitude</strong> 15, <strong>Reflex</strong> 15, <strong>Will</strong> 15</p><p><strong>Immune</strong> Necrotic, Poison, Disease, Sleep; </p><p><strong>Vulnerable</strong> Radiant 5</p><p><strong>Speed</strong> 8</p><p> </p><p><img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/bm.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":bmelee:" title="Basic Melee :bmelee:" data-shortname=":bmelee:" /> <strong>Necrotic Touch</strong> (Standard; at-will)</p><p>+6 Vs. Will, 1d10+3 necrotic damage.</p><p> </p><p><img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/area.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":area:" title="Area :area:" data-shortname=":area:" /> <strong>Necrotic empowerment</strong> (Standard; recharge <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/5.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":5:" title="Five :5:" data-shortname=":5:" /><img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/6.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":6:" title="Six :6:" data-shortname=":6:" />)</p><p>Burst 5, all allies in the burst can make a basic attack as a free action. </p><p> </p><p><img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/area.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":area:" title="Area :area:" data-shortname=":area:" /> <strong>Unholy Explosion</strong> (Immediate Interrupt, when reduced to 0 hitpoints) ♦ <strong>Necrotic</strong></p><p>Burst 3. all living creatures in the area are hit with the following attack. +6 Vs. Reflex 3d6+3 necrotic damage and all undead allies in the burst regain 15 hit points</p><p> </p><p><strong>Alignment</strong> Evil</p><p><strong>Languages</strong> Understands Creator</p><p><strong>Skills</strong> Acrobatics +8, Athletics +8</p><p><strong>Str</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Dex</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Wis</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Con</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Int</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Cha</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Equipment</strong> None</p><p> </p><p></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18px">Void Shard</span></strong></p><p><strong>Level 3 Minion</strong></p><p><strong>Tiny Shadow Animate</strong></p><p><strong>XP</strong> 37</p><p><strong>Initiative</strong> +3</p><p><strong>Senses</strong> Perception +3</p><p> </p><p><strong>Withering aura (Necrotic)</strong></p><p>aura 2; All creatures in the aura take 1 necrotic damage. Multiple withering auras stack (void shards are immune to this ability)</p><p> </p><p><strong>HP</strong> 1; a missed attack never damages a minion.</p><p><strong>AC</strong> 17; <strong>Fortitude</strong> 16, <strong>Reflex</strong> 16, <strong>Will</strong> 15</p><p><strong>Speed</strong> Fly 6 (hover) </p><p> </p><p><img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/bm.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":bmelee:" title="Basic Melee :bmelee:" data-shortname=":bmelee:" /> <strong>Void touch</strong> (Standard; at-will)</p><p>+6 Vs. Will, 1 necrotic damage</p><p> </p><p><strong>Of another dimension</strong> (Immediate Reaction (when hit by an attack); at-will)</p><p>There is a 50% chance that the attack is changed to a miss.</p><p> </p><p><strong>Portal</strong> (Immediate Reaction (when missed by an attack); at-will)</p><p>Another void shard appears in a square adjacent to the activating void shard</p><p> </p><p><strong>Alignment</strong> Unaligned</p><p><strong>Languages</strong> None</p><p><strong>Str</strong> 16 (+4)<strong>Dex</strong> 16 (+4)<strong>Wis</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Con</strong> 16 (+4)<strong>Int</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Cha</strong> 14 (+3)<strong>Equipment</strong> None</p><p> </p><p>Kudos</p><p> </p><p>-Sporemine</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Sporemine, post: 4877520, member: 80911"] Thanks for the help mesh. The site is still slow and I have spotty access to the internets. There are a couple things I would like feedback on: [B][SIZE=5]Mageripper Swarm[/SIZE][/B] [B]Level 6 Controller[/B] [B]Medium Aberrant Beast[/B] [B]XP[/B] 250 [B]Initiative[/B] +6 [B]Senses[/B] Perception +11 [B]Swarm of Fangs[/B] aura 1; The Mageripper swarm can make a bite attack as a free action against any creature in the aura. [B]HP[/B] 72; [B]Bloodied[/B] 36 [B]AC[/B] 20; [B]Fortitude[/B] 18, [B]Reflex[/B] 18, [B]Will[/B] 18 [B]Immune[/B] Gaze, Illusions; [B]Resist[/B] Half damage from melee and ranged attacks; [B]Vulnerable[/B] 5 close and area attacks [B]Speed[/B] 6, climb 4 :bmelee: [B]Bite[/B] (Standard; at-will) +11 Vs. AC, 1d10+4 damage [B]Anti-Magic Shield[/B] (Immediate Reaction (when hit with a magic attack); 1 per round) The attack is changed to a miss [B]Magic Leech[/B] When missed with a magic attack, the target loses the use of that attack until the end of the encounter. [B]Alignment[/B] Unaligned [B]Languages[/B] None [B]Skills[/B] Athletics +11, Nature +11, Stealth +11 [B]Str[/B] 16 (+6) [B]Dex[/B] 16 (+6) [B]Wis[/B] 16 (+6) [B]Con[/B] 16 (+6) [B]Int[/B] 16 (+6) [B]Cha[/B] 16 (+6) [B]Equipment[/B] None [B][SIZE=5]Necrosis Carnex[/SIZE][/B] [B]Level 3 Skirmisher (Leader)[/B] [B]Medium Natural Animate (undead)[/B] [B]XP[/B] 150 [B]Initiative[/B] +5 [B]Senses[/B] Perception +8 [B]Malign Aura (Necrotic, Fear)[/B] aura 3; All living creatures within 3 squares of the Necrosis Carnex take a -1 to all defenses. [B]HP[/B] 46; [B]Bloodied[/B] 23 [B]AC[/B] 17; [B]Fortitude[/B] 15, [B]Reflex[/B] 15, [B]Will[/B] 15 [B]Immune[/B] Necrotic, Poison, Disease, Sleep; [B]Vulnerable[/B] Radiant 5 [B]Speed[/B] 8 :bmelee: [B]Necrotic Touch[/B] (Standard; at-will) +6 Vs. Will, 1d10+3 necrotic damage. :area: [B]Necrotic empowerment[/B] (Standard; recharge :5::6:) Burst 5, all allies in the burst can make a basic attack as a free action. :area: [B]Unholy Explosion[/B] (Immediate Interrupt, when reduced to 0 hitpoints) ♦ [B]Necrotic[/B] Burst 3. all living creatures in the area are hit with the following attack. +6 Vs. Reflex 3d6+3 necrotic damage and all undead allies in the burst regain 15 hit points [B]Alignment[/B] Evil [B]Languages[/B] Understands Creator [B]Skills[/B] Acrobatics +8, Athletics +8 [B]Str[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Dex[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Wis[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Con[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Int[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Cha[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Equipment[/B] None [B][SIZE=5]Void Shard[/SIZE][/B] [B]Level 3 Minion[/B] [B]Tiny Shadow Animate[/B] [B]XP[/B] 37 [B]Initiative[/B] +3 [B]Senses[/B] Perception +3 [B]Withering aura (Necrotic)[/B] aura 2; All creatures in the aura take 1 necrotic damage. Multiple withering auras stack (void shards are immune to this ability) [B]HP[/B] 1; a missed attack never damages a minion. [B]AC[/B] 17; [B]Fortitude[/B] 16, [B]Reflex[/B] 16, [B]Will[/B] 15 [B]Speed[/B] Fly 6 (hover) :bmelee: [B]Void touch[/B] (Standard; at-will) +6 Vs. Will, 1 necrotic damage [B]Of another dimension[/B] (Immediate Reaction (when hit by an attack); at-will) There is a 50% chance that the attack is changed to a miss. [B]Portal[/B] (Immediate Reaction (when missed by an attack); at-will) Another void shard appears in a square adjacent to the activating void shard [B]Alignment[/B] Unaligned [B]Languages[/B] None [B]Str[/B] 16 (+4)[B]Dex[/B] 16 (+4)[B]Wis[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Con[/B] 16 (+4)[B]Int[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Cha[/B] 14 (+3)[B]Equipment[/B] None Kudos -Sporemine [/QUOTE]
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