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Gwendolynn Von Holden's Diary: Can't a girl get some sleep around here?
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<blockquote data-quote="Eeralai" data-source="post: 2671613" data-attributes="member: 15008"><p>We are working with setting and perspective in a writing class I'm taking. I decided to take what just happened and rewrite it in an omnicient perspective. This is what happened:</p><p></p><p></p><p>Thunder reverberated off the stone walls making Gwen clasp her hands over her ears, but </p><p>the other's merely flinched. The lightning bolt had driven the magical darkness away,</p><p>allowing Ternell to shove his sword through the last standing troglodyte. Blood </p><p>smattered the floor and walls, and small pools of it formed near the bodies. Korliss</p><p>stepped out from behind a curtain on the podium and kicked the naga to be sure she was</p><p>dead. The shove pushed a trickle of blood over the side of the podium, but didn't elicite</p><p>a move from the monster. Thinking it was safe, Korliss motioned to Chani, who set aside her</p><p>lute to help move the body.</p><p></p><p>The torch light cast shadows onto the stones that seemed to dance as the group moved around </p><p>the room, piling up the dead. Aaron mumbled to himself over the uselessness of the other magic</p><p>types in the party when it came to tasks like this. When the troglodytes were shoved together,</p><p>the naga was draped over them like a sash for a lich. Korliss thought he had noticed something odd</p><p>about the podium when he was moving the naga and went back to investigate. He saw the top</p><p>of it lifted off, and got Chani, Ternell, Aaron and Ardel to help him. They all gasped at the </p><p>glimmering jeweles and coins beneath it. </p><p></p><p>On the top lay a small harp carved from pale wood. Chani strummed it gently, and the notes filled</p><p>the room with a beauty unheard before in the chamber. Ternell and Aaron remarked about a sword that</p><p>had the markings of their god Pter on it. The rest of the group were ready to go through the</p><p>treasure carefully and quickly, except for Gwen who cried out about one of the gems.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Eeralai, post: 2671613, member: 15008"] We are working with setting and perspective in a writing class I'm taking. I decided to take what just happened and rewrite it in an omnicient perspective. This is what happened: Thunder reverberated off the stone walls making Gwen clasp her hands over her ears, but the other's merely flinched. The lightning bolt had driven the magical darkness away, allowing Ternell to shove his sword through the last standing troglodyte. Blood smattered the floor and walls, and small pools of it formed near the bodies. Korliss stepped out from behind a curtain on the podium and kicked the naga to be sure she was dead. The shove pushed a trickle of blood over the side of the podium, but didn't elicite a move from the monster. Thinking it was safe, Korliss motioned to Chani, who set aside her lute to help move the body. The torch light cast shadows onto the stones that seemed to dance as the group moved around the room, piling up the dead. Aaron mumbled to himself over the uselessness of the other magic types in the party when it came to tasks like this. When the troglodytes were shoved together, the naga was draped over them like a sash for a lich. Korliss thought he had noticed something odd about the podium when he was moving the naga and went back to investigate. He saw the top of it lifted off, and got Chani, Ternell, Aaron and Ardel to help him. They all gasped at the glimmering jeweles and coins beneath it. On the top lay a small harp carved from pale wood. Chani strummed it gently, and the notes filled the room with a beauty unheard before in the chamber. Ternell and Aaron remarked about a sword that had the markings of their god Pter on it. The rest of the group were ready to go through the treasure carefully and quickly, except for Gwen who cried out about one of the gems. [/QUOTE]
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