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<blockquote data-quote="Insight" data-source="post: 5955245" data-attributes="member: 11437"><p>I have reviewed all of the characters and they are all approved, games mechanics wise.</p><p></p><p>Please see below for any notes related to your character submission.</p><p></p><p>[sblock=James Marks - Walking Dad]Concept: Martial Arts Instructor</p><p>Point Total: 67pp</p><p>Ability Scores: 18 = 36pp</p><p>Defenses: 6 = 6pp</p><p>Skills: 36 ranks = 18pp</p><p>Advantages: 7 = 7pp</p><p>Notes: Explain the "Justice" complication.[/sblock]</p><p>[sblock=Michelle Lindberg - Shayuri]Concept: Corporate Climber</p><p>Point Total: 50pp</p><p>Ability Scores: 13 = 26pp</p><p>Defenses: 5 = 5pp</p><p>Skills: 30 ranks = 15pp</p><p>Advantages: 4 = 4pp</p><p>Notes: None, looks good.[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>[sblock=Jacie (no last name) - Jemal]Concept: Pro Gamer</p><p>Point Total: 69pp</p><p>Ability Scores: 12 = 24pp</p><p>Defenses: 8 = 8pp</p><p>Skills: 56 ranks = 28pp</p><p>Advantages: 8 = 8pp</p><p>Powers: 1 = 1pp</p><p>Notes: Needs last name. What are some of the video games in which she competes? They can be real-world games or one you've made up.[/sblock]</p><p>[sblock=Marcus Holmes - HolyMan]Concept: Anchorman</p><p>Point Total: 60pp</p><p>Ability Scores: 14 = 28pp</p><p>Defenses: 6 = 6pp</p><p>Skills: 24 ranks = 12pp</p><p>Advantages: 14 = 14pp</p><p>Notes: I would expect a TV Anchorman to have more Persuasion and possibly some more Expertises relating to History, Politics, Current Events, Pop Culture, or whatever. I would expect these to be near the PL cap. A few more skill points towards that end would probably be fine. Also, he needs some kind of basic backstory. I'd also like you to state which TV station he works for. You can make up something if you want.[/sblock]</p><p>[sblock=John Sears - BBs]Concept: Actor</p><p>Point Total: 44pp</p><p>Ability Scores: 5 = 10pp</p><p>Defenses: 3 = 3pp</p><p>Skills: 46 ranks = 23pp</p><p>Advantages: 8 = 8pp</p><p>Notes: I can understand some of his high skills, but I'd like to see an explanation as to why his Perception and Stealth are so high. Also, his Hide in Plain Sight advantage. It makes me think that he was a burglar or jewel thief or something in his spare time. Maybe some expansion of his background is in order.[/sblock]</p><p>[sblock= Kyle Ellinger - Graybeard]Concept: College Student and Baseball Player</p><p>Point Total: 68pp</p><p>Ability Scores: 13 = 26pp</p><p>Defenses: 9 = 9pp</p><p>Skills: 50 ranks = 25pp</p><p>Advantages: 8 = 8pp</p><p>Notes: None, looks good.[/sblock]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Insight, post: 5955245, member: 11437"] I have reviewed all of the characters and they are all approved, games mechanics wise. Please see below for any notes related to your character submission. [sblock=James Marks - Walking Dad]Concept: Martial Arts Instructor Point Total: 67pp Ability Scores: 18 = 36pp Defenses: 6 = 6pp Skills: 36 ranks = 18pp Advantages: 7 = 7pp Notes: Explain the "Justice" complication.[/sblock] [sblock=Michelle Lindberg - Shayuri]Concept: Corporate Climber Point Total: 50pp Ability Scores: 13 = 26pp Defenses: 5 = 5pp Skills: 30 ranks = 15pp Advantages: 4 = 4pp Notes: None, looks good.[/sblock] [sblock=Jacie (no last name) - Jemal]Concept: Pro Gamer Point Total: 69pp Ability Scores: 12 = 24pp Defenses: 8 = 8pp Skills: 56 ranks = 28pp Advantages: 8 = 8pp Powers: 1 = 1pp Notes: Needs last name. What are some of the video games in which she competes? They can be real-world games or one you've made up.[/sblock] [sblock=Marcus Holmes - HolyMan]Concept: Anchorman Point Total: 60pp Ability Scores: 14 = 28pp Defenses: 6 = 6pp Skills: 24 ranks = 12pp Advantages: 14 = 14pp Notes: I would expect a TV Anchorman to have more Persuasion and possibly some more Expertises relating to History, Politics, Current Events, Pop Culture, or whatever. I would expect these to be near the PL cap. A few more skill points towards that end would probably be fine. Also, he needs some kind of basic backstory. I'd also like you to state which TV station he works for. You can make up something if you want.[/sblock] [sblock=John Sears - BBs]Concept: Actor Point Total: 44pp Ability Scores: 5 = 10pp Defenses: 3 = 3pp Skills: 46 ranks = 23pp Advantages: 8 = 8pp Notes: I can understand some of his high skills, but I'd like to see an explanation as to why his Perception and Stealth are so high. Also, his Hide in Plain Sight advantage. It makes me think that he was a burglar or jewel thief or something in his spare time. Maybe some expansion of his background is in order.[/sblock] [sblock= Kyle Ellinger - Graybeard]Concept: College Student and Baseball Player Point Total: 68pp Ability Scores: 13 = 26pp Defenses: 9 = 9pp Skills: 50 ranks = 25pp Advantages: 8 = 8pp Notes: None, looks good.[/sblock] [/QUOTE]
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