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<blockquote data-quote="Walking Dad" data-source="post: 5505769" data-attributes="member: 59043"><p><span style="color: DeepSkyBlue"><strong>Octavia, "Fallen Angel"</strong></span></p><p> </p><p>[sblock=sheet]<span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"></span></strong></span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">PL 10 (150=30+17+0+</span></strong></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">16+</span></strong></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">61+26)</span></strong></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Abilities (30PP)</strong></span></span> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Str 10; Dex 20; Con 18; Int 10; Wis 16; Cha 16</span> <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> </p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Saves (17PP)</strong></span></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Tough: 10 (0PP)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Reflex: 12 (7PP)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Fortitude: 5 (1PP)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Will 12 (9PP)</span> <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> </p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Combat (0PP)</strong></span></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Initiative: +13 </span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Defense: +10 (0 FF) </span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Attacks: Ring +12</span></p><p> CMB: +0</p><p>CMD: 25 <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Skills (16PP)</strong></span></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Diplomacy +13 (10 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Escape Artist +18 (13 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Notice +18 (15 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Sense Motive +14 (11 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Stealth +20 (15 ranks)</span> <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> </p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">Powers (61PP)</span></strong></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Flight 3 (Power loss Drawback:</span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: White">if wings are immobilized; Common, Minor; -2pp</span></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">) (4PP)</span> <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Immunity 3 (Aging, Disease, Poison) (3PP)</span> <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Protection (Impervious-<span style="color: Yellow">6</span>) 6 (12PP)</span> <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Invisibility 2 (All visual Senses) (Drawback: Passive -2pp) (6PP) </span><span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Device Ring 6 (24PP) (Drawback: Hard to lose)</span> <span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">- </span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Blast 9 (Divine Energy Ray) (18pp)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">- </span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Accurate 6 (6pp)</span></p><p>- Penetrating 5 (5pp)</p><p>- Precise 1 (1pp)</p><p>Mental Blast 3 (12pp)<span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p> </p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Feats (26)</strong></span></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Dodge 10</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Inspire 5</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Improved Initiative 2</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Evasion 2</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Super-senses (Darkvision)</span></p><p> Grappling Finesse</p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Eye-in Back of Head</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Uncanny Dodge 2 (Visual, Audio)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Move-by Action</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Combat Awareness </span><span style="color: Lime"><strong>ok</strong></span></p><p>[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>----</p><p></p><p>- The build is readable.</p><p>- The divine blast breaks the PL cap: 9 (damage) + 12 (attack) > 2x PL 10</p><p></p><p>- I dislike that all of the characters offensive combat prowess come from the ring.</p><p>- I dislike the combination of dodge 10 with 4 points worth of other feats to 'dodge' buying a regular defense bonus.</p><p></p><p>Even the sample Butler has a better base combat training than Octavia. Her full base combat training is in line with a PL 0 minion.</p><p></p><p>I would suggest to make the mental blast part of the rings feature and reduce your feats:</p><p></p><p>[sblock=sheet]<span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"></span></strong></span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"></span></strong></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Combat (20PP)</strong></span></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Initiative: +13 </span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Defense: +10 (4 FF) </span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Attacks: base: +2 Ring +12</span></p><p> CMB: +2</p><p>CMD: 27</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Skills (16PP)</strong></span></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Diplomacy +13 (10 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Escape Artist +18 (13 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Notice +18 (15 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Sense Motive +14 (11 ranks)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Stealth +20 (25 ranks)</span></p><p></p><p></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">Powers (45PP)</span></strong></span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Device Ring 5 (20PP) (Drawback: Hard to lose)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">- </span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Blast 8 (Divine Energy Ray) (16pp)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">- </span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Accurate 5 (5pp)</span></p><p>- Penetrating 3 (3pp)</p><p>- Precise 1 (1pp)</p><p>AP- Mental Blast 6 (accurate 1) (1pp)</p><p></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><span style="color: PaleTurquoise"><strong>Feats (16)</strong></span></span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Dodge 2</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Inspire 5</span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Improved Initiative 2</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Evasion 2</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Super-senses (Darkvision)</span></p><p> Grappling Finesse</p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Uncanny Dodge 1 (Audio)</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Move-by Action</span></p><p> <span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Combat Awareness</span></p><p></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">PL 10 (144=30+17+20+</span></strong></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">16+</span></strong></span><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'"><strong><span style="color: PaleTurquoise">45+16)</span></strong></span></p><p>[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>You have 6 pp to re-purchase things my suggestion missed.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Walking Dad, post: 5505769, member: 59043"] [COLOR=DeepSkyBlue][B]Octavia, "Fallen Angel"[/B][/COLOR] [sblock=sheet][FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise] PL 10 (150=30+17+0+[/COLOR][/B][/FONT][FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise]16+[/COLOR][/B][/FONT][FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise]61+26)[/COLOR][/B][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Abilities (30PP)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Str 10; Dex 20; Con 18; Int 10; Wis 16; Cha 16[/FONT] [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Saves (17PP)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Tough: 10 (0PP)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Reflex: 12 (7PP)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Fortitude: 5 (1PP)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Will 12 (9PP)[/FONT] [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Combat (0PP)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Initiative: +13 [/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Defense: +10 (0 FF) [/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Attacks: Ring +12[/FONT] CMB: +0 CMD: 25 [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Skills (16PP)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Diplomacy +13 (10 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Escape Artist +18 (13 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Notice +18 (15 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Sense Motive +14 (11 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Stealth +20 (15 ranks)[/FONT] [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise]Powers (61PP)[/COLOR][/B][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Flight 3 (Power loss Drawback:[/FONT][FONT=Verdana][COLOR=White]if wings are immobilized; Common, Minor; -2pp[/COLOR][/FONT][FONT=Verdana]) (4PP)[/FONT] [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana]Immunity 3 (Aging, Disease, Poison) (3PP)[/FONT] [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana]Protection (Impervious-[COLOR=Yellow]6[/COLOR]) 6 (12PP)[/FONT] [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana]Invisibility 2 (All visual Senses) (Drawback: Passive -2pp) (6PP) [/FONT][COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana]Device Ring 6 (24PP) (Drawback: Hard to lose)[/FONT] [COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana]- [/FONT][FONT=Verdana]Blast 9 (Divine Energy Ray) (18pp)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]- [/FONT][FONT=Verdana]Accurate 6 (6pp)[/FONT] - Penetrating 5 (5pp) - Precise 1 (1pp) Mental Blast 3 (12pp)[COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Feats (26)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Dodge 10[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Inspire 5 [/FONT][FONT=Verdana]Improved Initiative 2[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Evasion 2[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Super-senses (Darkvision)[/FONT] Grappling Finesse [FONT=Verdana]Eye-in Back of Head[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Uncanny Dodge 2 (Visual, Audio)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Move-by Action[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Combat Awareness [/FONT][COLOR=Lime][B]ok[/B][/COLOR] [/sblock] ---- - The build is readable. - The divine blast breaks the PL cap: 9 (damage) + 12 (attack) > 2x PL 10 - I dislike that all of the characters offensive combat prowess come from the ring. - I dislike the combination of dodge 10 with 4 points worth of other feats to 'dodge' buying a regular defense bonus. Even the sample Butler has a better base combat training than Octavia. Her full base combat training is in line with a PL 0 minion. I would suggest to make the mental blast part of the rings feature and reduce your feats: [sblock=sheet][FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise] [/COLOR][/B][/FONT][FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Combat (20PP)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Initiative: +13 [/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Defense: +10 (4 FF) [/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Attacks: base: +2 Ring +12[/FONT] CMB: +2 CMD: 27 [FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Skills (16PP)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Diplomacy +13 (10 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Escape Artist +18 (13 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Notice +18 (15 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Sense Motive +14 (11 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Stealth +20 (25 ranks)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise]Powers (45PP)[/COLOR][/B][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Device Ring 5 (20PP) (Drawback: Hard to lose)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]- [/FONT][FONT=Verdana]Blast 8 (Divine Energy Ray) (16pp)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]- [/FONT][FONT=Verdana]Accurate 5 (5pp)[/FONT] - Penetrating 3 (3pp) - Precise 1 (1pp) AP- Mental Blast 6 (accurate 1) (1pp) [FONT=Verdana][COLOR=PaleTurquoise][B]Feats (16)[/B][/COLOR][/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Dodge 2[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Inspire 5 [/FONT][FONT=Verdana]Improved Initiative 2[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Evasion 2[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Super-senses (Darkvision)[/FONT] Grappling Finesse [FONT=Verdana]Uncanny Dodge 1 (Audio)[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Move-by Action[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana]Combat Awareness[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise]PL 10 (144=30+17+20+[/COLOR][/B][/FONT][FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise]16+[/COLOR][/B][/FONT][FONT=Verdana][B][COLOR=PaleTurquoise]45+16)[/COLOR][/B][/FONT] [/sblock] You have 6 pp to re-purchase things my suggestion missed. [/QUOTE]
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