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Shemeska's Planescape Storyhour (Updated 29 Jan 2014)
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<blockquote data-quote="Ryltar" data-source="post: 2619870" data-attributes="member: 19393"><p>Nice update, once again <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />. I guess the "high grass" scene was (at least somewhat) inspired by the 'raptors in Jurassic Park (2, I think it was)?</p><p></p><p>Oh, and what did you do to the retriever - did you "template" it somehow, or was it just a fluff change? That was seriously wicked imagery <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />.</p><p></p><p>Taking a page out of Gez's book:</p><p>[spoiler]Some minor nitpicks and typo corrections:</p><p> A bolt of lightning from one eye alone cut across the sky with a thunderclap that send a wave through the grass with its force --> should probably be sen<strong>t</strong></p><p></p><p>A second eye let loose a horizontal column of liquid flame, igniting a swatch of the grass and incinerating the path before it --> swa<strong>th</strong></p><p></p><p>Nisha glanced back at the burning Retriever behind them. “Anyone else think taking on the Rakshasa again might me melodramatic after that?” --> might <strong>be</strong></p><p></p><p>It was filled with tangles of water lilies growing somehow in the muddle, tainted water --> muddle<strong>d</strong>[/spoiler]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ryltar, post: 2619870, member: 19393"] Nice update, once again :). I guess the "high grass" scene was (at least somewhat) inspired by the 'raptors in Jurassic Park (2, I think it was)? Oh, and what did you do to the retriever - did you "template" it somehow, or was it just a fluff change? That was seriously wicked imagery :). Taking a page out of Gez's book: [spoiler]Some minor nitpicks and typo corrections: A bolt of lightning from one eye alone cut across the sky with a thunderclap that send a wave through the grass with its force --> should probably be sen[b]t[/b] A second eye let loose a horizontal column of liquid flame, igniting a swatch of the grass and incinerating the path before it --> swa[b]th[/b] Nisha glanced back at the burning Retriever behind them. “Anyone else think taking on the Rakshasa again might me melodramatic after that?” --> might [b]be[/b] It was filled with tangles of water lilies growing somehow in the muddle, tainted water --> muddle[b]d[/b][/spoiler] [/QUOTE]
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