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<blockquote data-quote="Herremann the Wise" data-source="post: 2191285" data-attributes="member: 11300"><p>Hi A Crazy Fool,</p><p></p><p>This is certainly different in terms of a character roster compared to other story hours. It would be interesting to see you getting inside the heads of these strange and different characters - find out what makes them tick. Look forward to reading more.</p><p></p><p>However, just a couple of ideas for future writing so you can get a few more readers. Try to write more paragraphs with fewer sentences in each one. It makes what you write more readable as well as helping the flow of your story. If you space out your dialogue too (new line every time you have a new speaker), it will help you define certain nuances in the exchanges between your characters.</p><p></p><p>And as Qwernt suggested, most people have black as their background so garish blue followed by a hazy red for the type is difficult to read. Save the pretty colours for headings or important information. Plain regular uncolored type is best. Let your words and ideas do the communicating, not the color. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /> </p><p></p><p>Anyway, I'm looking forward to more. I've only recently started my own story hour so I know how difficult it can be to get things happening and get some good comments and plenty of views. It's hard <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />. If you feel inclined, have a look at my story hour if you want a good read and a laugh. It would be good to have you drop by.</p><p></p><p>Best Regards</p><p>Herremann the Wise</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Herremann the Wise, post: 2191285, member: 11300"] Hi A Crazy Fool, This is certainly different in terms of a character roster compared to other story hours. It would be interesting to see you getting inside the heads of these strange and different characters - find out what makes them tick. Look forward to reading more. However, just a couple of ideas for future writing so you can get a few more readers. Try to write more paragraphs with fewer sentences in each one. It makes what you write more readable as well as helping the flow of your story. If you space out your dialogue too (new line every time you have a new speaker), it will help you define certain nuances in the exchanges between your characters. And as Qwernt suggested, most people have black as their background so garish blue followed by a hazy red for the type is difficult to read. Save the pretty colours for headings or important information. Plain regular uncolored type is best. Let your words and ideas do the communicating, not the color. ;) Anyway, I'm looking forward to more. I've only recently started my own story hour so I know how difficult it can be to get things happening and get some good comments and plenty of views. It's hard :). If you feel inclined, have a look at my story hour if you want a good read and a laugh. It would be good to have you drop by. Best Regards Herremann the Wise [/QUOTE]
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