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<blockquote data-quote="Sialia" data-source="post: 1310764" data-attributes="member: 1025"><p>Thank you BSF.</p><p> </p><p> </p><p>yup.</p><p> </p><p> </p><p>Bandeeto begged me to take it out altogether. </p><p> </p><p>I cut her swearing during Volpe's storytelling, and during the dragon's blow off about the motivations of elves. And when she was needling Lillabo--that scene got fdropped altogether. And I cut her oath when she first saw the boat and it was the most beautiful and awesome thing she had ever seen in her whole life. Every time that character opened her mouth, something raw and honest came out of it that would have resulted in a whole row of inappropriate smileys.</p><p> </p><p>But that first one. I tried <em>so</em> hard to do somethign else with it, but it kept dying on me. Sticking a euphemism or newly coined local swearword in there was either cloyingly cute or incomprehensible. I could not thing of a single word that expressed Mirabelle's complete and utter frustration so clearly, and so succintly. </p><p> </p><p>I tried writing <em>around</em> it, but a quote from Mark Twain on the subject of how to write kept stopping me. He said something like, "Never say 'the grandmother screamed.' Bring her on, and let her scream." </p><p> </p><p>So I did.</p><p> </p><p>But I'm open to suggestions.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Sialia, post: 1310764, member: 1025"] Thank you BSF. yup. Bandeeto begged me to take it out altogether. I cut her swearing during Volpe's storytelling, and during the dragon's blow off about the motivations of elves. And when she was needling Lillabo--that scene got fdropped altogether. And I cut her oath when she first saw the boat and it was the most beautiful and awesome thing she had ever seen in her whole life. Every time that character opened her mouth, something raw and honest came out of it that would have resulted in a whole row of inappropriate smileys. But that first one. I tried [i]so[/i] hard to do somethign else with it, but it kept dying on me. Sticking a euphemism or newly coined local swearword in there was either cloyingly cute or incomprehensible. I could not thing of a single word that expressed Mirabelle's complete and utter frustration so clearly, and so succintly. I tried writing [i]around[/i] it, but a quote from Mark Twain on the subject of how to write kept stopping me. He said something like, "Never say 'the grandmother screamed.' Bring her on, and let her scream." So I did. But I'm open to suggestions. [/QUOTE]
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