ADV: The Last Tower of Gerovia

[Kyramus]

I am posting this to get responses to see how people like the self made module.
Make comments, good bad ugly, etc.

obviously any of my players, DO NOT READ THE ATTACHED LINK.
please go to
www.geocities.com/kyramus/lasttower.doc

 

[Bob Aberton]

Not bad, not bad at all.

I can find several nice touches here - such as the women pregnant with half-fiends (presumably the Gelugon's children?), and the Gelugon makes a really nice recurring enemy.

I'm not an expert reviewer, but I do have a few suggestions. 1) what is the treasure map to? 2) this just a matter of personal taste, but the well room just seems a bit bland. Instead of spikes and grease, I would maybe make it some kind of cursed water or something, maybe with a sympathy effect on it that just screams "Drink me!" and then really nasty things happen to the unfortunate drinkers.

All in all, I think it's a pretty good module.

 

[Kyramus]

Thanks bob, it is a rough draft.
I was going to look it over once more tonight before I run it tomorrow.

Treasure map leads to an old cache of Gerovian magic items. (note: Gerovian age was the height of Human magic) It is obviously guarded, but not mentioned on the map.

The well does need a little more oomph. Considering baatezu need water as well, it would probably poisoned water or some such.

I'll post again when I have made the changes.

Anyone else have any comments?

 

[Kyramus]

the well has been updated.

Please anyone else, read and give me some feedback.

I want to know if you guys like it.

 

[Kyramus]

is it that good????????

(looks around) you guys read it, where's the comments?????

 

[Kyramus]

58 views and no more comments?

I need comments.
fishing for comments.

The party never got to this part, they got bogged down by an ambush of 4 hill giants, 4 fomorians and 4 wyverns + 1 giant spell caster (who escapes)

 

[Kyramus]

last call for comments, then I'm taking that file off that link.

 

[Kyramus]

Link dissolved.

Moderators please close of this thread. it hasn't generated any comments nor ideas to augment the existing module that I created.

Thanks for those who viewed it also.