I totally agree it's a valid criticism. I guess maybe I should clarify my perspective. I care less about whether the editing on the product is perfect and more about the adventure layout and the introduction to a 4E game. In both cases (so far), I think they exceeded my expectations. The layout is significantly better than Sunless Citadel, Forge of Fury, etc. (albeit with some editing-related issues like item prices and what those items are and references to the PHB). And, the feel for 4E is awesome; however, I am obviously somewhat jaded by the excerpts (especially magic item).
I made up my BBEG for the end of the RttToEE campaign (see spoiler) and it took me many hours. First, I had to decide what he would be, which was no easy task counting the sheer number of books I have. Then, working up the stats and magic items took me the longest time. While at some lower level of my consciousness I enjoyed the tweaking of numbers and items, it really was a waste of time. It makes it even more aggravating knowing I could've spent all that time for 5 minutes of "fun" as he gets popped in the first round. Sure, the players might have a load of "fun", but not equivalent to the time spent.
I have a saying about parenting, "It's all about the kids." Just about everything you do when being a parent is with an eye towards your kids, making them more happy, protecting for them, providing for them, etc. Well, in D&D it's
not all about the players.
[sblock] Unariq VolTalsimol, the first First, a CR25 Ulitharid (from Lords of Madness). [/sblock]