I Made A Comedic Superhero Short Film - Feedback

So I made a superhero short film. It's a 3-minute proof of concept for a TV series I'm hoping to pitch with my writing partner. Since it's just a proof of concept the characters aren't super fleshed out, but I think the idea of a dark, gritty, over-the-top world which takes itself seriously, but goes so far in that direction that it's funny is there. Anyway please take a look and let me know what you think! EN World has been great at helping me make RPG stuff so why don't we all make movies together now too!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SQ0iNNJAwbs

I half expected one of them to let, "I'm Batman" slip out

I definitely like the lighting and camera work. Some of the funny was a bit laboured but no worse than most of the stuff I see online and significantly better than the average. Well done overall

Thanks for the kind words. Definitely understand what you're saying. We'll keep tinkering!