GameDoc
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Too often now players (esp in 4e/pfrpg) are more interested in gaming the system than putting themselves in situation.
OMG - You just summed up the rift in the local gaming community of my small town in the most succinct terms ever. I'm totally going to quote you on this. I see a big split between those who came up prior to 3e and those who came in with 3e, PF, or 4e. Not edition warring here, just an observation and not generalized to all.
Back on topic - I think the OP did a great job. Kids have great imaginations and props for encouraging it in them.