D&D General Warduke. An attempt to provide an historical look at the character in print.

[Damien Titchener]

I'd like to stress once again that these are all really small things, and the paper overall is clear and well-written. I offer these suggestions only in the spirit of showing you things to watch for when writing for a grade.

Thank you, Jayoungr.

The suggestions were constructive. I did four drafts before posting it to the forums. I needed extra eyes, so all the advice given so far has been outstanding. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

 

[Eis]

very cool read

I'll pick a nit, you misspelled Elminster as "Eliminster"

 

[Damien Titchener]

very cool read

I'll pick a nit, you misspelled Elminster as "Eliminster"

Thank you.

I've fixed the typo. Have a nice day.

 

[Eis]

Thank you.

I've fixed the typo. Have a nice day.

you as well!